The Gallery
This topic has moved here: Subject: [Story] Believe
  • Subject: [Story] Believe
Subject: [Story] Believe

Hey people. Just a little heads-up.

Been writing a little bit lately. I sorta have the first chapter planned out, and I shall be posting soon. But don't count on that, I hope to have at least 4-5ish chapters written before I start revealing it.

One quick hint and a bit of help needed. It's set after the events of Halo 3, so it's a bit like Glasslands. Is there any names people could suggest? I know its a bit slack for you guys since you don't really know anything about it, but any help anyway?

I was considering Aftermath, but I think that's already taken and it seems a bit boring.

  • 01.05.2012 10:06 PM PDT

How about New Dawn, or something revolving around a new era.

  • 01.05.2012 11:13 PM PDT

Yeah, that's a good idea actually. The problem is, for a book the name is something got to do with the actual plot, but simply branding mine as Aftermath or New Era etc might seem a bit broad. Although I'm just not too sure how I would sum most of the book up, or name which part is the most important and most defining.

But thanks!

  • 01.07.2012 4:40 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

It might pay to have a talk with someone on here. Laying your cards out might shed another light on it. Plus, a new point of view couldn't hurt.

TL;DR: plz tell me your secrets!

  • 01.07.2012 8:00 AM PDT
Subject: [Short Story] Believe (COMPLETE)

No u

I to hear story.

I just accidentally all over the place.

[Edited on 01.08.2012 11:52 AM PST]

  • 01.08.2012 11:51 AM PDT
Subject: [Story] Believe


Posted by: OfTheBloodguard
It might pay to have a talk with someone on here. Laying your cards out might shed another light on it. Plus, a new point of view couldn't hurt.

TL;DR: plz tell me your secrets!

Never!

Ok maybe.

  • 01.10.2012 5:11 PM PDT
Subject: [Short Story] Believe (COMPLETE)

Gah.

I had the first chapter roughly half written. And the second, about half as well, except with a fair chunk of it as notes on my phone. And ta da, what do you expect, my phone decides to delete them. asdfuhaisdugh^&*

Gah again. Oh well, I'll just have to recover it... I still have most of the notes on my iPad, so that's OK. Just a shame that I had some rather *SPOILERZ* nice conversation scenes typed out on my phone...



[Edited on 01.21.2012 3:19 AM PST]

  • 01.21.2012 3:18 AM PDT

(Just a little heads-up for any readers still remembering this thing... ^^)

Just tumbled my way out of a rather nasty writers block. Was stuck on a bit of sensitive dialogue for a while, and it sorta drained all my motivation. Managed to get started again though, and things should be running smoothly!

  • 02.13.2012 8:12 PM PDT

Are you writing a sequel?! I sure hope so! As you can see, I have been gone for a while.

  • 02.13.2012 9:35 PM PDT
Subject: [Short Story] Believe (COMPLETE)

Welcome back! I've been writing a brand new story lately. I have considered writing a sequel for this, but if in the future I do it would be a fleshed out novel with - hopefully - a lot more pages.

As for my story-in-progress, I've still been working on a name, and so far I have no idea. Anyhoo, I'm making good progress (for my standards anyway) and should be finishing off a good hunk of Chapter 2. I haven't completed Chapter 1, and I'm pretty unsatisfied with it at the moment, so I'll be rewriting that portion.

  • 03.03.2012 5:15 PM PDT

No post in a while. But anyhoo, still going alright with the new story! Just for anyone who is still out there...

  • 04.02.2012 4:36 AM PDT
  • gamertag: [none]
  • user homepage:


Posted by: S p h 1 n X O 7
No post in a while. But anyhoo, still going alright with the new story! Just for anyone who is still out there...
Will there be Elites?!! I love alien culture.

  • 04.02.2012 8:20 AM PDT

No... >.>

Nah, haha, you've hit the jackpot, the whole story is about Elites!

  • 04.03.2012 3:00 AM PDT

I've got just over 30 pages in my new story at the moment. Been writing a fair bit lately. First chapters pretty short, bit of a introduction, and then the second one gets you into the action with a big read. Currently halfway through the third one, which slows down and let's you sink into the real meat of the story.

Not knowing if I should post it now? Or should I wait until I have a few more chapters? The story is about Elites, and I've made up a few little bits and pieces here about their culture, (nothing drastic).

[Edited on 05.06.2012 2:13 AM PDT]

  • 05.05.2012 11:49 PM PDT

No u

Release it. Now.

  • 05.06.2012 3:07 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Sweet Jesus, release it now!

  • 05.06.2012 11:23 PM PDT

Ahh, Lord, I might have to!

Soon, soon, all will be revealed...

Hm, I'm actually going to start the real plot of the story now. I wonder if it'll be a bit boring at the start. But it shouldn't. You guys will be the judge anyway, I shall reward thee with the first chapter when I can!

Oh wait, I'm not even sure what to call it yet, lol, but I'll work it all out.

  • 05.09.2012 11:43 PM PDT

And oh wow, I just realised I haven't even written the prologue! Better get to work, damn.

  • 05.09.2012 11:46 PM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!


Posted by: S p h 1 n X O 7
Oh wait, I'm not even sure what to call it yet, lol, but I'll work it all out.
I know that feel, man. I still haven't named half teh futer characters in my story. Or places. Or everything.

  • 05.10.2012 12:03 AM PDT

I think I should seriously post up the new story now... at least the prologue, which is what, an exact page long? I really want to rewrite it, make it different, but honestly, I can't be bothered and I'm not sure what I would do to make it different. Oh well. Look out for the new story soon guiz, it should be tonight or tomorrow! Or the day after!

  • 05.14.2012 1:12 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Do it. Do it now.

  • 05.17.2012 12:13 AM PDT

Soon, very, very soon.

[Edited on 05.17.2012 7:49 PM PDT]

  • 05.17.2012 7:46 PM PDT

CHL: 47-1 - Priority 09873H-79
ENCRYPTION STATUS: [ CLASSIFIED ] CODE: XX03-1Y-XX/RED
CLASSIFICATION: EYES ONLY (SECTION III OMEGA DIRECTIVE)

//: INCOMING TRANSMISSION :\\

There is a large... approaching... I repeat, - wall of text... ETA, one hour -

Numbers amount to... thousand, I repeat... sixteen thousand - and counting... unacceptable - only course of action -

Requesting reinforcements - necessary... high-value target, spotted... - evasive actions... unavailable - repeat, requesting reinforcements... - target has been located -

... the Second Matron, I repeat, has been spotted -

//: END TRANSMISSION :\\

  • 05.17.2012 7:53 PM PDT

No u

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

  • 05.17.2012 10:15 PM PDT