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Posted by: A Fat Bell End
Ha, nice. I actually "borrowed" my buddy's last name for that character... Which is funny, seeing as his personality is nothing like the character's whatsoever.
...And, the story is fairly complicated as well... I just hope that it isn't too complicated. Too complicated often results in a boring story, in my experience :)Hmmm... a Story that is too complicated is often boring -takes notes-
Right... so anyways. There are a few errors, none that are like 'noteable' by the average reader unless we're talking Wolverfrog or AssaultCommand here.
So in my opinion, the story is good and etcetera.
[Edited on 10.28.2011 10:29 PM PDT]