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Subject: Halo Chronicles: S-019 'Rain'

Heres a nice little short story I wrote for all of you, it isn't my 'best' piece of work, but it will be what it is. Enjoy... even if the prologue isn't an optimal length.

Spartan-019: Chronicles
Prologue:

The Spartan had never really had a childhood. He noted to himself and mumbled incoherently to himself. The only thing on his mind right now was stuff he didn't care to elaborate on. His brain was in the stage of entering manhood. Also known as Puberty, he didn't enjoy it and it made him squirm. He had always made a habit of locking emotions out and closing his mind off, so he became that one Spartan Cadet that always ate alone and tried to do things his way. He didn't take responsibility over the lives of others and he had a tendency to run off into the forest alone before completing their assigned mission almost single-handedly.

After constantly getting scolded by his superiors he was locked in solitary confinement for three days without food or water, back when he was nine.

Today... well today he was getting his 'flu-shot(s).'
He was lain down onto a table, with a needle already injected into his skin, the cold and texture of the table added to the feeling of 'I don't wanna be here'. The fluid entered his bloodstream and it didn't seem so bad
It felt like - PAIN! OH GOD THE PAIN!

Rain-019 opened his eyes with brutal effort before he sat up and screamed; "FFFFF-blam!-!" Before he fainted, and slammed his back against the table. That's all -019 remembered about the time he woke up.

  • 10.28.2011 10:59 PM PDT

Nice. Short, but sweet. Is there more of your writing to come in the near future?

  • 10.28.2011 11:03 PM PDT

Yeah, working on Chapter One. The prologue was just something I had to get out of the way. Expect Ch. 1 to be... pretty much development.

  • 10.28.2011 11:07 PM PDT

Nice work, keep it up!

  • 10.29.2011 1:42 AM PDT