- stormtank37
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- Honorable Member
Bip Bap Bam in the brainpan!
Sorry, but I laughed at first... The voice acting was what got me laughing. Constructive criticism? When doing the opening scenes of the movie, have the spartan out of frame, and have him walk into the frame. Gives a better look. Usually a great story has a great beginning and ends with a hook, which you did pretty well with the elite. I commend you for that, but may I ask you, do you have a plot for the series already thought out and planned?