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Right, here are some positives and negatives from your video.
Positives:
Good gameplay, you two worked well as a pair and you made some good use with the Hologram ability.
Solid DMRs you two have there, I can tell bloom screwed you up most of the time, but very solid overall.
Funny commentary, I liked the part about the Cat.
Negatives:
Did you record your voices? They don't sound clear enough. Try using Skype or something, at least then, your voices will sound a lot clearer.
Even though I enjoyed your commentary, you didn't really seem to focus your commentary on the match you and your wife played on. I do admire random stuff, because it brightens the mood up, but sometimes it gets rather stale after a while if you don't concentrate on the gameplay.
Last thing that needs to be said, try to include an introductory scene, so you can explain yourself better and what the viewers can expect from your video. Try to include some music with your introduction, try experimenting with some music samples, if you think the audience will like it, then by all means, go for it. But be selective with the choice of music you wish to include. No one will want to hear any mainstream garbage. "Cough...Justin Bieber...Cough"
Just a few pointers to help you out.
[Edited on 11.26.2011 4:02 PM PST]