- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
I know I'm going against the Ninja himself, but I didn't really like it. First of all, I thought the characters, even the bad guys, juvenile and unbelievable. Second, I'm not sure exactly how you plan on having a "battle for the forums" when we don't even know what is going on. Let's just say, I didn't like the style. Of course, you can use whatever styel you want, but that movie-script writing that you used just kind of made it seem like I was reading a comic strip without pictures.
I know you're a great writer, and according to everyone else here, I'm probably wrong, but those are just some of the reasons I didn't like it.