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Subject: Halo reach machinima trailer

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Let me know what you think

Thanks


(since their is a lot of negative feed back, at least let me know how I can improve it.)

[Edited on 12.03.2011 1:25 PM PST]

  • 12.03.2011 12:30 PM PDT

Who are you? stop look at me.

bad srsly

  • 12.03.2011 12:32 PM PDT

Pretty cool machinima trailer, but you should change the "Machinima" title since Machinima can ban you or other things for copyright. Not sure about that but watch out. Its good for a rookie. Not like if I could make anything better.

[Edited on 12.03.2011 12:34 PM PST]

  • 12.03.2011 12:33 PM PDT

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Posted by: HC Swat Is Back
Bad.

Sorry.
what did you not like about it? (besides the whole 343 logo on the bottom left lol)

  • 12.03.2011 12:35 PM PDT

Ohai, I'm Loscocco (pronounced Loss-cocoa). I'm a college student (computer science major), 3D animator, and long-time Halo player.

It was really anticlimactic. It was just epic-hero music played to some dull AI waddling around.

  • 12.03.2011 12:47 PM PDT

Over 3K subs and only 18k views...and almost 4 years old 0_0

I wouldn't call it "Machinima", most of the footage held no director value in it at all..i would say it was a compilation with music and titles thrown in there.

[Edited on 12.03.2011 12:59 PM PST]

  • 12.03.2011 12:57 PM PDT

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Posted by: Mikelp_1
It was really anticlimactic. It was just epic-hero music played to some dull AI waddling around.
I'm still a noob when it comes to machinimas, I mainly focus on commentaries and such. I'm not an editor

  • 12.03.2011 1:05 PM PDT

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Posted by: Ghost Bn
Over 3K subs and only 18k views...and almost 4 years old 0_0

I wouldn't call it "Machinima", most of the footage held no director value in it at all..i would say it was a compilation with music and titles thrown in there.
It was a trailer for an upcoming machinima...

  • 12.03.2011 1:10 PM PDT

Trailers incorporate footage from the Movie itself..i believe you understand that this can not be considered a trailer.

  • 12.03.2011 1:14 PM PDT

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Not good.

  • 12.03.2011 1:20 PM PDT

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Posted by: Nephilim713
Not good.
What can I do to make it better? not to sound like a douche but just telling me "not good" doesnt really teach me what I can improve on.

  • 12.03.2011 1:23 PM PDT
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The 343 forums suck. They're full of retarded kids and mods who got butthurt in the B.net forums for being told that they're bad.

You should prolly just move to another hobby.

  • 12.03.2011 1:27 PM PDT

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Posted by: Nephilim713
Not good.
What can I do to make it better? not to sound like a douche but just telling me "not good" doesnt really teach me what I can improve on.


Delete it.

  • 12.03.2011 1:29 PM PDT

How about Using your OWN recordings..Hos About making interesting Shots..how about adding filter effects to make it look more sharp, better detail, How about giving us a taste of a story, how about NOT using footage from a 3rd party...all we saw was Firefight footage..that was not even made by the director of the video..as i said this was nothing more but compilation of footage from reviews and showcasings thrown in a typical "epic" music and broken up with titles.

  • 12.03.2011 1:29 PM PDT

http://www.capturemyhaloclips.com/ - Get your Halo clips captured.
The Artists Corner - Show other members your artistic talent.
Storywrite - Where I am writing my book.

I would post the preview of my machinima here to see what people think but I don't want to steal the OP's spotlight or hijack his thread.

  • 12.03.2011 1:29 PM PDT

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Posted by: TheSpiderChief
I would post the preview of my machinima here to see what people think but I don't want to steal the OP's spotlight or hijack his thread.
I dont mind, feel free to post it

  • 12.03.2011 1:31 PM PDT

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Posted by: TheSpiderChief
I would post the preview of my machinima here to see what people think but I don't want to steal the OP's spotlight or hijack his thread.
I dont mind, feel free to post it

Okay, thanks dude.
Steeled Ghosts preview

Before anyone says anything negative I would like to point out that the preview was rushed and filming doesn't start until next year.
Yes, I know, the music is terrible in this preview but it'll be better in the final version of the film.



OT: If that was your own content then I'd give you a pat on the back.
Take what you have from your trailer and create it doing something similar.

And don't let these negative feedbacks stop you. If you want to create a machinima then you go ahead and do it.

[Edited on 12.03.2011 1:41 PM PST]

  • 12.03.2011 1:37 PM PDT

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Posted by: Ghost Bn
How about Using your OWN recordings..Hos About making interesting Shots..how about adding filter effects to make it look more sharp, better detail, How about giving us a taste of a story, how about NOT using footage from a 3rd party...all we saw was Firefight footage..that was not even made by the director of the video..as i said this was nothing more but compilation of footage from reviews and showcasings thrown in a typical "epic" music and broken up with titles.
Just to let you know.

I didnt edit it, my cousin did. I cant edit at all. I recorded segments (the ones with out the 343 logo) idk why he used 3rd party recordings. Never claimed to be a pro, I'm a noob when it comes to machinimas and such I do commentaries for video games like every one else.

those are my excuses XD

  • 12.03.2011 1:39 PM PDT

Actually pretty decent. Just remember that there is a fine line between dramatic effect and hilariously cheesy dramatic effect. Try not to go with the latter too much; it may seem like a parody.

  • 12.03.2011 3:22 PM PDT