- iKetchum
- |
- Honorable Member
Posted by: SKYDROME
Okay, first off:
Why did you show the CEA box? Showing the H3 or Reach Box would have made more sense to me.
Then, the montagy thing where you were showing the players, and then some game clips, was good, but showing Sudd 2 and then Starcraft right after didn't make sense. Same thing later on, with one of them talking over the top of BO gameplay.
The interview stuff was good, even if I didn't recognise any of the players bar Sudd twins.
Showing the trash talk stuff probably wasn't a great idea.
Probably getting some more stuff directly from MLG would be good too.
Overall, I liked it, but it's not exactly going to win over any hearts, especially if you're trying to raise awareness of MLG.
Posted by: SKYDROME
Okay, first off:
Why did you show the CEA box? Showing the H3 or Reach Box would have made more sense to me.
Then, the montagy thing where you were showing the players, and then some game clips, was good, but showing Sudd 2 and then Starcraft right after didn't make sense. Same thing later on, with one of them talking over the top of BO gameplay.
The interview stuff was good, even if I didn't recognise any of the players bar Sudd twins.
Showing the trash talk stuff probably wasn't a great idea.
Probably getting some more stuff directly from MLG would be good too.
Overall, I liked it, but it's not exactly going to win over any hearts, especially if you're trying to raise awareness of MLG.
Thank you for all the feedback. If it was not for responses like this, I would never improve.
Like I said in the description, this is no where near a final product. The intention of the project was (kind of to get an A) to raise awareness of MLG and the community surrounding it. The time constraints and seasonal scheduling made it almost impossible to get more interviews, and without any funding we were unable to film at event ourselves.
Having to rely on other people's videos is never a good idea, but I am none the less happy with the result.
Again, thank you for your criticism, I hope to create a final product worthy of your praise when/if I get more funding/support for an extended documentary!