- Blackhalos99
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[POSSIBLE SPOILERS!!!!]
Team Kaskara:
G327-Brazen
G281-Mannix
G184-Ryan
G167-Scott
G079-Buddy (Not in yet)
G160-Emma
Hmm... i think we could have this chapter bring out an new team, and have them actually escape the Camp. This can be used to show their characters and how they come together as a team in the Harsh environment of Onyx.
The Beginning can start out with the Feast, then we would focus on the team that we're going to use for this story. They will quickly go over their plan broadly, then put it in action. We can if we haven't already go back to Thomas noting the open spots in themes shall, not wanting to ruin everyone Else's meal, he leaves to find them.
Now as it's going to be friggin' cold and such the Team will try to find a cave to take shelter in, all the while expanding on their personalities and relationship with each other.
During the trip someones either going to trip and break something or collapse due to hypothermia. The Team will bands together and help the spartan, though some having thoughts on leaving them. The leader will step up and pretty much man up at this point, bringing them to a cave they spotted.
Once in the cave, the Leader will try to start a fire to warm the team up, while one of the Spartans tends to the wounded Spartan.
(1) The Leader will be unable to start a fire an eventually pass out, waking up to Thomas starting a fire and pulling blankets out of his backpack.
(2) The Team will get desperate and start to lash out at each other, only to notice a figure standing at the cave opening.
(3) The Team will realize the dire situation, but conclude anything is better than being back at the camp, then Thomas will enter the cave.
Whichever way we choose we will have Thomas entering the cave and assisting the team with the fire and the wounded spartan, he will comment that they are all missing the Dinner and pull out a box of food out of his backpack. The Team would be reluctant at first but Thomas will start talking to them, saying "I understand what you are all going through, and I understand what I'm putting all of you though. But you have to realize that I'm not just some heartless monster. Here's my deal to you all, if you wish you can all come back to the camp with me then you can and I'll pretend none of this happened. Or you can choose to leave and I'll have you shipped off Onyx on the next transport back to your orphanages where you came from. But first eat, then decide as a Team what you want to do.
They will slowly decide to stay as a team, coming across the realization that they have no other place to go and don't want to leave their teammates, and Thomas will call for a pelican to pick them up. After the short ride they will return to the Mess hall with the cheering of most of the Spartans, insert any cameos here :3, and end with:
(1) Just that
(2) Thomas recounting how proud he was of them
(3) Someone in the Team accounting for the bond they will now share after this
(4) Anything else.
But I don't want to leave this on an entirely bright note, after the short story we should have a glimpse and what is to come in the actual story, my idea is to have Buddy's little disappearance scene, as described below, here and have it be short and have Buddy basically drifting slowly to the bottom of the lake seeing the figure to whom he believes is that it is his female companion from his old ODST squad. It will end with the bright light, "being he's death." Or is it?
Now i do realize that it would be confusing at first, but that's the point of having it here.To have the readers guessing as to what that's all about, only to have it slowly unravel in time.- BH