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Subject: Halo Literature Revision

Can you look over this. It might be really bad so can you give me advice on how to improve it. Tell me what is good and what is really bad, stupid, etc...

*Note this is in play format*
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-UpJ-C_cHHZhW8NQIGJWCa7mm JTcYtOYkwpRo52QPlg/edit
Tell me if lin is broken

  • 01.04.2012 2:41 PM PDT