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Subject: Halo Reach Machinima: Input?

Hey everybody. I'm a starting Machinima director and I made a quick short not too long ago. I just wanted to see what kind of input/thoughts/opinions you guys have. I'm open to constructive criticism, please feel free to tell me what you think. Thanks.
Here's a link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVrvXynrKWU&context=C3c94e 7dADOEgsToPDskINAsUsnf7STeYjoUeecScy

  • 01.09.2012 5:13 PM PDT

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The editing seems simple enough, though you should fade to black as the clip of your video is almost over. Don't have the video stop before the black rolls in.

Also, continuity, your main character begins with no blue flames, but then ends with blue flames. You should keep it to the same outfit as you had in the beginning to end.

  • 01.09.2012 5:38 PM PDT

i agree with AzNs but not bad all around good job

  • 01.09.2012 6:46 PM PDT

hey man. ive been directing a certain big machinima a for about 8 months.. the best advice for a new director is no advice at all.. Its your story, so you need to present it how you see fit. Besides fade to black is over rated. use your own style bro. be creative, thats what directing is all about. Show everybody whats new and whats flashy. You cant just wait for us to see it, you gotta throw it in our face!

  • 01.09.2012 11:18 PM PDT