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[22:08] [JohnHoward:] The Halo 1 pistol wasn't a mistake...
[22:08] [JohnHoward:] It was also intended to be the ultimate hold out weapon...
[22:09] [JohnHoward:] I always believe that balance is about giving each weapon / ability / whatever it's own perfect situation.
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I'm used to C and C with artwork, so if you don't mind...
Although your feel is simple and effective, the first impression only lasts but a moment. The BG is too plain. You have a simple black background, broken by a lens flare effect. This would be alrite if the lens flare matched your render's lighting, but it doesn't. The direction the flare is coming from doesn't match the way the light is reflecting off your render. The image could use some re-arranging. Also, the text is too plain. Try adding some type of filter, or add a faded image of some sort, like a 3, to compliment that effect.
To sum things up, good effort. However, your BG is too plain, the lens flare and the light source for your render don't match, and your text is too plain. All of this, however, can be fixed with a few simple tweaks. I want to see how this will look after you clean it up, so make sure you update the topic when you're done.