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Posted by: BC1096
It takes place on reach (I know it's not to original)
But in the perspective of a group of civilians in their fight for survival during the invasion
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6 days into the invasion of reach
Characters: Andrew, Noah, John, Christian, Michael and Wallace
This part takes place inside a city called Artemis, a city in ruins
Andrew: Where's Wallace ?
Noah: He went out looking for food, those bastards took all we had, we couldn't do anything.
Andrew: Are you serious! Why the he'll didn't you fight them, do something, Do you not understand how screwed we are!
Noah: He had a god damn gun! what the hell am I supposed to do! take one for the team? You making this -blam!- harder for us, for god sake we both know what happened to Christian,
Andrew: Don't put that on me! Im not the one who gave him a gun and let him kill himself! That his fault he couldn't take it he-
(door opens)
Wallace: There's no food, no water, nothing. Just bodies and rubble
(Wallace looks at Andrew)
Wallace: what Happened...Dont tell me someone else gave up!
Andrew: No! We are all here. Have you heard anything from Michael and Luke?
Wallace: No. Haven't seen them since-
(an explosion is heard in the distance)
Andrew: Get into the shelter get the shotgun and stay with Noah.
Noah: don't tell me your going to look for them! They could still be out there.
Andrew: And if they are?
Noah: then that pistol won't save you from -blam!- and you'll die like the others!
Andrew: I'm not losing another person! I won't live know that Michael-
( door is slammed open )
Micahel: Guys we got to go!
Wallace: what happe-
Michael: Shut the hell up! Listen to me we have to get out before they-
(the room went white, ears went deaf, blue lines and a light blue light emitted from the center of the room, and a burning sinsation consumed my body)
End
Thoughts and should I keep going so you can understand more clearly