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Posted by: xMaJoR cRaBsx
Dreams of being the one and only soup that people enjoy. Or wants to be a hero that dishes out hot scolding soup to evil.
Some of you might remember me, though you most likely don't; a long time back I posted some of this story for feedback.
Well, since I was last here I've made significant revisions and edits, finally completing Chapter 1.
If you would, please watch my trailer first! There are little bits in the trailer that I hope will enrich the experience; some references, the chance to hear the voice of one of my original characters, and hints as to where I'll be taking things. Just bear with me that the planet is Onyx and not Reach ;) The date at the end is humorously wrong, but that was the date I posted my first bit of WIP story.
Trailer -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zHu4lVDX9M
The story is here -
http://thesupersoup.deviantart.com/art/Halo-Team-Gladius-Prol ogue-and-Ch-1-276801777
I've been especially careful in writing this; I'm treating it as though it could potentially be canon. Please, I encourage you to cross-reference my dates, times, and events with Ghosts of Onyx. I hope to prove I'm taking the source material seriously.
Enjoy! Please, let me know what you think; I thrive on feedback, good and bad. Criticize, critique, or complement; the choice is yours, and I will most certainly read every bit of it.
[Edited on 01.18.2012 12:13 AM PST]