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Subject: Couple of drawings

"I may not be perfect, but always been true."

As the title says, this is just a couple of drawings I made when I was bored, constructive criticism and opinions will be appreciated.

Rivals
Rivals V2.0
(inspired by the cover of "The Duel" episode in Halo: Legends)

Legendary Shield
Legendary Shield V2.0
Legendary Shield V3.0

(I know the head is not really centered or anything, no need to remind me)


So...discuss.

  • 01.19.2012 1:23 AM PDT

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Interesting. Some of the lines are a bit off, but I like the concept.

  • 01.19.2012 6:00 AM PDT

The tide is turning, brothers! Let us take our kingdom back!

Pretty sweet stuff.

  • 01.19.2012 7:43 AM PDT
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Awesome stuff.
Now for the constructive critisism.
As you said, on the Legendary Difficulty, the head is off center, but in the future that can be fixed by being a bit more careful. use your graph paper to measure ups and downs of the drawing and it will turn out more symmetrical.
So graph paper can be really good for this sort of thing, but it makes a lousy background unfortunantly.
Also, you can shade in a bit more to make it look more 3D-ish.
Is the Spartan helmet in Rivals a Mark V?

  • 01.19.2012 5:16 PM PDT

"I may not be perfect, but always been true."


Posted by: Lancexlink
Awesome stuff.
Now for the constructive critisism.
As you said, on the Legendary Difficulty, the head is off center, but in the future that can be fixed by being a bit more careful. use your graph paper to measure ups and downs of the drawing and it will turn out more symmetrical.
So graph paper can be really good for this sort of thing, but it makes a lousy background unfortunantly.
Also, you can shade in a bit more to make it look more 3D-ish.
Is the Spartan helmet in Rivals a Mark V?


Yeah, it is. I am not really good at drawing the Mark VI so I was like "Whatever I will use the Mark V".

Thanks for the comments though, even if I am not really good with symmetry I'll give it another try and see how it turns out xD

  • 01.19.2012 9:49 PM PDT

Yes, there're too many numbers in my name.

I do like the proportions, as well as the overall size. But there are a bit of details that need filling in.

Other than that, it looks fairly awesome. Nice job!

  • 01.20.2012 4:45 AM PDT
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I love cookies, and metal.


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Posted by: Lancexlink
Awesome stuff.
Now for the constructive critisism.
As you said, on the Legendary Difficulty, the head is off center, but in the future that can be fixed by being a bit more careful. use your graph paper to measure ups and downs of the drawing and it will turn out more symmetrical.
So graph paper can be really good for this sort of thing, but it makes a lousy background unfortunantly.
Also, you can shade in a bit more to make it look more 3D-ish.
Is the Spartan helmet in Rivals a Mark V?


Yeah, it is. I am not really good at drawing the Mark VI so I was like "Whatever I will use the Mark V".

Thanks for the comments though, even if I am not really good with symmetry I'll give it another try and see how it turns out xD
You do that, but this time, use a ruler to get your basic highth, width, exc.
That way wont have to use the graph paper.

  • 01.20.2012 1:40 PM PDT
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Pretty good, just needs minor fixes here and there, and you'll be set.

  • 01.20.2012 1:48 PM PDT

Spread the love...

Nice, just some adjustments and it'll look great :)

  • 01.20.2012 5:10 PM PDT

I ♥ Bungie!

Rivals is bad-ass.

  • 01.23.2012 9:05 PM PDT

"I may not be perfect, but always been true."


Posted by: ODSTFADE
Rivals is bad-ass.


I'm glad you like it :)

  • 01.24.2012 1:15 AM PDT

HOW TO BE MLG PRO:): I'd like to start off saying, change your name. Do it right now, your not MLG until you have either an x, ii or my personal favorite, the xx. The point of this is to make your gamertag stand out from others, if a kid sees you have a double vowel in your name they know that your obviously MLG material.

This sucks(No offence)..i could draw it better with my right hand...(I'm Left handed btw)
Elementary school forced art is what it looks like.


But on the good side:)
I like the helmet on the rivals one(V2)


[Edited on 02.22.2012 4:25 PM PST]

  • 02.22.2012 4:23 PM PDT

Cool concepts, nice job.

  • 02.22.2012 5:16 PM PDT

New Marathon? Thanks Bungie!


Posted by: Grunt Inheritor
This sucks(No offence)..i could draw it better with my right hand...(I'm Left handed btw)
Elementary school forced art is what it looks like.


But on the good side:)
I like the helmet on the rivals one(V2)

hey not everyone can draw

  • 02.22.2012 7:45 PM PDT