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Subject: New show

heyy guys i am a new director/producer of this halo show i stared and i would like any feed back or good advise on how i can make it better any tips or anything thanks (: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cP25slZsRWE&list=LLAlmmrc9 O6Xd_eiAf0zn61w&feature=mh_lolz

  • 01.20.2012 10:41 AM PDT

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Its nice.

  • 01.20.2012 12:00 PM PDT

My main xbox gamertag is Jrman16753
Do you like intelligent debating? Join secular sevens.
Do you love space and astormony join space explorers.
My name is Jordan, I like video games, books, films, history, science, politics, geography and religion.
Never stop learning and always question.
For me, it is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring.
Sapere aude

You should do more.

  • 01.20.2012 12:00 PM PDT

Halo Fan loved halo3 and now am playing halo reach, i play the campaign first because thats what type of guy i am ;) then i just hop into multiplayer and later i do some commentaries or machinima's =D
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Its good but needs some work. Is this your first project of all time or just in this area?

Constructive Criticism: You need to make the camera flow more smooth, try planning shots out before you do them and turn down sensitivity. Changing Camera views once in a while helps keep the video more interesting and can get rid of some time watching a character walk around and not get to the point.

Keep up the good work, and i have a couple of fails that you could use if you wanted.


[Edited on 01.20.2012 1:06 PM PST]

  • 01.20.2012 1:06 PM PDT

thanks guys and yes please send in your fails. it also my first project of all time. I will get better though

  • 01.20.2012 1:26 PM PDT