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(Before you read this please understand that I am not joking. This is 100% percent real and not a joke, at all.)
I'm only 14. Yes, I know this sounds crazy coming from someone of this age. Also, with the fact that I'm a "fanboy" it makes it even worse. But, if I could work at Bungie I would enjoy being a writer, since the job application is currently available. Now, I will show you some of my own work that I have created and put in my own words(These are movie reviews, I know, but it's something, right?).
A movie review for the movie "Real Steel"
****Plot/Storyline****
In 2020, humans have been replaced by robots in boxing. Charlie Kenton (Hugh Jackman) is a former boxer who attempts to get money in illegal boxing matches between robots to pay his debts to loan sharks. During a fight, Charlie's robot, Ambush, is destroyed by Black Thunder, a bull belonging to Ricky (Kevin Durand). Having made a bet that Ambush would win, Charlie now owes Ricky $20,000, which he doesn't pay before leaving.
While leaving, Charlie is informed that a family member had died, and he has to attend a meeting to decide the fate of his 11-year-old son Max (Dakota Goyo). Max's aunt, Debra (Hope Davis) and uncle Marvin (James Rebhorn), want full custody, and Charlie gives it to them in exchange for for a price from Marvin, $50,000 of in advance, on the condition that Charlie takes care of Max for three months, while Marvin and Debra are away on a second honeymoon.
My rating for the Plot/Storyline is 9/10, although I did not explain it fully you will know why I give it this rating when you see the movie.
****Action/Thrill****
Now, with recent movies that have come out, like Apollo 18 for example, (not enough alien spiders), they don't always have good story, action, or thrill. It's just a remake of Paranormal Activity but on the moon. Anyways, back to the movie Real Steel. This had amazing CGI and an amazing thrill to it every single battle. Although it may be slow, (about 10-15 minutes of the whole movie was slow, if that.) there was a lot of action that took place in this movie that makes it a very great movie. Personally, it's one of the best movies I ever seen. It's even better than Dark of The Moon! (DOTM really wasn't all that great, but Real Steel was an awesome movie.) So, Action/Thrill rating is 9(and 1/2)/10.
****Overall Rating****
With all the movies that came out this year, Real Steel has got to be the best movie of the year. I don't care who you are, I would recommend this movie to anybody. It's action packed with a great storyline and a great plot. And what makes it better? Boxing robots. If you like to watch boxing and you like robots this is the movie for you. Pixel's rating: 9(1/2)/10. Two thumbs up everybody, you need to see this movie as soon as you can!
Please give me honest opinions. Thanks everyone!
[Edited on 02.07.2012 1:57 PM PST]