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Subject: LW: Tempest II
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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

The most awesome thing ever!

The Nighthawk took off towards the asteroid cities...it entered Slipspace.

"We should be there in 2-3 hours Lillith. I hope that's soon enough to find her."

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I'm back.

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Lillith placed a clip of tranquiliser darts in her pulse rifle. "I hope, so."...

The woman, watched from a apartment window, the people going aboutt heir daily lives in the sprawl of the city. She turned back to the metal board she was using as a mock-up and continued her training...

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Blake followed Lillith and Pat to the dropship and sat in a seat in the troop bay. "Is she a threat right now?"

[Edited on 10/2/2004 1:06:09 PM]

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Jorg searches the ships data base to find out whats been happing the last 200 or so years. As he is scanning all doors shut and lock and the lights turn red, there has been a breach...

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Lillith plugged in the NAV-points to the asteriods, the ship left the flagship and entered slipstream...

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Jorg pounds madly at the commands for the door tring to get it open, then suddenly the ship jets foward, someone, somehow had gotten the ship into slip space.

Aarlos watched as the unknown ships crash into The Tempest then as he is making it back to the ship it disapers into slip space leaving him behind....

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Chronus latches on to the outher hull of the Tempest. It stretches on beyond his range of vision..

He smashes open a window, and is sucked inside by the backwash of air..

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what the..? who controls the Tempest, If you're out there.. and Im out here..?

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Aarlos just sat there in awe, he couldnt belive what just happend. He checked the Ships oxygen, 30 more minuets. And no food at all. He had to do something fast....

Jorg gave up on the door and ran back to the data base, he tried hacking into the controlls there but he fail also, all he found where the cordanets where they were heading.....

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Posted by: Righteous Reaper
what the..? who controls the Tempest, If you're out there.. and Im out here..?


Exactly :)

[Edited on 10/2/2004 1:17:06 PM]

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Jorg stared at the cordanets he couldn't understand them, they weren't anything he had seen before. He could here someone out side the door he picked up his gun, and the door opened....

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Chronus felt the ship enter slip space..

"what the hell!? the fusion engines are completely fired! who could do this?"

He grabs a pack of fuel cells and heads toward the fighter bay.. "perhaps the Achilles has survived the battle"

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The Nighthawk appeared above the asteriods as it exited slisptream, Lillith put the sensors to follow anything that was not human...

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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

The most awesome thing ever!

Ah, gtg. Be back later tonight, maybe.

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The door opened and there stood Keratin, her skin peeling off, her eyes now blood red, the look of death all around her, she had been possesed. As she entered the room, Jorg felt cold. The sound of her voice was much deaper and distorted.
"Jorg....it has been many years sence you killed me...354 years ago. Back on Rigal X...dont let the body fool you, i had to grab this sack of meat to talk to you...have you remembered me now?"


Aarlos quickly went to the nearest ship and search its remains there he picked up some food and a few oxygen tanks. He knew the only way to survive was to build a ship out of the debrie and fly it to the nearest planet....

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As the woman walked the streets, she did not know her image was being transmitted to the ones in the Nighthawk... Lillith and Pat, put gasmask on to hide their identity, the ship decended towards a docking station...

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Chronus entered the fighter bay.. now empty and cold.. the outer door was now a giant melted slab of steel.. he would have to blast his way out..

He boarded the Achilles, still moored were he had left it.

He hovered over the ruins of his once-mighty army, now blackened and charred by the fires of destiny.

He fired a rocket at the outer door.

The room explosivly decompressed; aka, the 300 ton door blasted off of it's hinges, and hurled the Achilles into space.

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Posted by: Gnome
Aarlos watched as the unknown ships crash into The Tempest


The scavengers boarded The tempest and looked around, they stared at its beauty then they heard a noise some one near them was talking, the voice was low and weird. They gathered there guns and rounded the corner to see the back of a women...

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As Lillith walked into the streets, her pulse rifle hidden under her fla jacket, she followed the sensor as it tracked the woman, Pat following...

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Before Jorg could answer 15 men ran around the corner and pointed there guns at them both, the possesed creature turned around and one of the men shot at it. The possesed "women" yell "Do not, Anger Xindi!" 'She' raised a hand and suddenly all the men fell to the floor dead....

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Xindi turned away from the dead bodies back to Jorg,
"you see Jorg my...travel...to hell and back gave me powers not even you could think of"
All thoughts of Xindi were quickly returning to Jorg, and he wished they hadn't he new what Xindi wanted, his Head....

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Lillith saw a person round a corner, it wore all black, the sensor showed it was her. Lillith and Pat ran after her...

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Ok i gtg, and im gonna write my next post off line, so please dont do anything with The tempest till im back...thnx all i need to know is what year is it in the story?

[Edited on 10/2/2004 1:47:52 PM]

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There is no real definite year, it is just very far in the future, so lets say 12,000 A.D.

[Edited on 10/2/2004 1:59:41 PM]

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