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Subject: Laser war:Tempest 2
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"We have lived through many war's, we shall live through this one." Lillith said, as she saw Pat walk in...

  • 10.03.2004 2:40 PM PDT
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I think so, yes.

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ok il be makeing mine now.

  • 10.03.2004 2:41 PM PDT
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nvm

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Chronus knew that now there was hope for his cause.. he teleported into the ship, preparing to divulge his plans to the others..

  • 10.03.2004 2:43 PM PDT
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Okay here is mine: Epilogue

Lillith watched the newsreports of distant worlds and colonies, becoming abandoned. The people gone. She and the others knew the truth it was the Faceless Warrior's army, it was growing in strength...

The Warrior heard screams of pain and anger rise up at the training field, great machines of war screeched to life. It was music to its ears, the child watched to of the top fighters. As there blades flashed in the torch light, and crimson blood slipped on the floor. The child took it all in... Soon he would be a warrior...

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And so the war began, it raged on for years. 18 to be precise. Martin's fleet won victory after victory, but it was never enough. The enemy seemed endless. Slowly, the fleets numbers dwindled...drastic actions would be required. We join Martin in the capital, discussing the war with his generals...

Pat had been equilly active in the war, just in a more secretive way. He had been working with Lillith on small convert ops, and while he had been wounded once or twice, the operations were mainly succesful. We join him and Lillith in the Nighthawk, returning from another attack...

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My Prologue:

Eighteen years had passed, since the war had started, the first offical conflict began 15 years ago. Lillith had grown in power, learning through dozens of battles, new techniques to kill... It took its tole, her mind was ravaged by the horrors of war, and the deeds that she had to commit... The flute a constant therapy, as she played. That and her friends were what kept her commited to the war and true to her actions... Her work mainly consisted of covert missions with Pat...

The Faceless Warrior watched Romulus fight, a minute later two slave fighters lay dead or dieing at his feet. "Excellent work," the warrior said, "soon we will begin the true offensive." The orbs continued to cast darkness into them... They feed off the war and grew stronger in power...

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Lillith saw the border come into view, great space stations bristling with weapons, passed by them. Lillith breathed a sigh of relief, "another mission successful, Pat." She turned and smiled to her friend... Lillith checked the bandage on her arm...

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"Yup. It's not much, but it'll set that planet's troop production back awhile. You sure your arm's ok?"

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Lillith sqeezed it lightly, her face winced in pain, she felt the bullet roll unde her skin, "ya, it could have been a lot worse." She smiled...

  • 10.03.2004 2:55 PM PDT
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Epilogue.

Chronus, the Guardian of the Tempest, had turned back onto the side of freedom. After being granted a second chance by the elusive Praetor, Dolorus, he had traveled back to Maori, to ally himself with the other great adventurers..

As time went by, he trained himself in human tactics, and weaponry. He grew skilled in combat, and prepared for the day in which his mission would be accomplished.

  • 10.03.2004 2:55 PM PDT
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"Good, we'll get it fixed when we get back to the ship anyways."

Martin looked out the flagship's window, they were returning again...he ordered the docking bay opened...

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A bee shuttle, pulled the Nighthawk into a docking bay of one of the new HighSeekers... The Nighthawk was larger but still sleek, it was equiped with new weaponry developed during the war.

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Skipping 18 years kinda conflicts with the storyline I have for Blake. Oh well, here's my epilogue:

2 years after the war had started, the mercs sent several scouts to different planets. Blake and Dunne failed their missions, and now they had to be eliminated for it...

As the war continued and Blake fought, Dunne grew more impatient. He did not expect the war to last so long, but he actually disliked working for the mercs, but he still hated Blake for his betrayal...



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The detachment floated aimlessly throgh space for 2 years looking for the faceless warior until it finaly found what it was looking for...A huge battle erupted killing the whole detachment exept for one ship that returned almost unharmed it was only the begining.Remes trained for battle until he was at the age of 15 in the arts of armed combat unarmed combat psychic combat and in the way's of life and love.when he went out to fight commanding the whol Becamara army and fleet both sides fighting over the same part of space for years neither makeing any headway.Hai'liose Remes's adoptiv dad became a diplomat.Olong the wa remes and a squad of Becamara rescued a civilian transport were he met the love of his life her name Bella....Reme's orders his ships to take up defenciv positions in no mans land his thoghts turning Bella.Suddenly a cruser explodes right next to the ship Remes is in the sound is deafening but there is no other damage Fighters are launced and curses the name of his brother...

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The techs seal off the docking bay...

Pat gets out of the pilot's seat,"Well, let's go."

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Lillith stepped out of the Nighthawk, the docking bay was a buzz of activity, she heard a report over the com. "Evac dropships coming in, we have sever cases of decomposition, get bio-tubes ready."

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18 years after the war had begun, Chronus had finally learned to accept his human allies..

Sitting in a lab station, he had begun creating new weapons for the human armies almost 14 years before, but he still had never found a way to reverse engineer the weapon Dolorus had given him.. it perplexed him greatly. as he finished the day's work on his newest weapon, he decided to head down to the training room and battle the holograms for a bit longer..

  • 10.03.2004 3:02 PM PDT
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Pat heard the com as well. He shakes his head,"I wish this were over. Still, even Martin's fleet doesn't stand a chance against their homeworld defences...yet."

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Romulus watched a battle unfold, he chuckled as he saw a enemies soldiers head explode from one of the new suicide psychics. "Such effective weapons humans aren't they." Came a voice from behind, he turned. There stood the Faceless Warrior. "Yes, master they are."

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Reme's say's over the universal alied com as he usualy did Do not lose hope remember what we are fighting for.

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"Ya come on, Pat." She messed up his hair, with her hand. Lillith smiled, "I better get this checked up on." She walked towards the medical bay...

  • 10.03.2004 3:07 PM PDT
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Pat laughed aloud,"All right. I'll be on the bridge with Martin."

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Im back

  • 10.03.2004 3:09 PM PDT