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Two ships drop out of a large space station above, what had become called Hell, by the allies. The two ships were jagged edged and huge they were the new class of ship. The Faceless Warrior stood on one, Romulus on the other... They headed towards the front...

[Edited on 10/3/2004 3:11:03 PM]

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o and if you guys are wondering Bella is a human.

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Jorg’s Legacy

As he drifted away from Maori, and The Tempest, Xindi’s thoughts were on one thing, The Levithon. It was quite on the drop ship. Only a few days of food and oxygen Jorg had to reach The Levithon soon. He sat there for entire days just thinking. He came across several ways to have won the Invasion but none of that mattered any more. And his Curiosity always came back to what he felt inside those creatures.

While he was thinking this over a image came over the View Screen. First small then as he got closer it became larger and larger. It was The Levithon, it looked like it was just made. He had read the Data Base on The Tempest and realized The Levithon should have at lest some damage on it from the battle. But someone or something had repaired it, to almost mint condition.

He had hesitated on boarding but he had no choice the Levithon had a lock on the little Drop Ship and had it in its Tractor beam. Soon his ship had landed in the Docking Bay. He grabbed his gun and slowly got out. It was eerily quite in the docking bay. No sign of a battle at all, in fact no sign that this ship was used at all. The Docking bay was storied with unused Drop ships and Escape Pods. It was like The ship had been remade and restocked all together.

He Curiously walked to the nearest door. It opened up into a small long hallway. He kept going, the hallway had a weird blue hew to it. As he walked to the door at the other end he noticed it was locked. Xindi walked closer to the door and a green laser popped out of the door controls and the laser went to his eyes. As fast as he could Xindi went to grab his gun, it was gone. The laser stared in his eyes for a moment and then disappeared. The Computer said in a cold voice, “Access granted, welcome Xindi”
“How do you know my name? Who are you?” Xindi asked but his question fell on deaf ears.

He continued down the short hallway to another locked door at the end. This time as Xindi got close to the door, the blue hew turned red.
“You must prove your self Xindi” The Computer said.
“How?” Xindi asked the computer. No answer till the door he had just came though opened and three Unknown creatures walked in. They starred at Xindi for a minuet until the computer spoke,
“These are my Guardians, if you beat them you can have access to the Room of light”

The Guardians had black fur every where around there body, 3 feet long tails and stood on there back legs. They stood 5'4" and had four large teeth jetting out of there faces, Two going up from the bottom, and two going down from the top. Saliva dripping down from them.

After the computer said this two of the creatures ran at Xindi, while the other just stood there. Xindi quickly dodged them and shot a ball of fire at one, and lighting at the other. The two were hit but it seamed to hardly effect them, One raised his hand and seven inch blades came out of its finger nails. It Dived at Xindi. He tried to dodge it but he wasn’t fast enough, the creature landed on his chest and started to slice his chest. Xindi put his hand on the creatures chest, and pounded him with a force punch and he flew up and hit the ceiling, Xindi rolled out from under it before if came crashing down on its head, Dead.
The other raised its tail and showed a large blade on the end. It jumped up and landed behind Xindi and swiped at him, Xindi dodge and rolled to the wall, He turned to face the creature and raised both hands, A yellow light formed around both hands. The Light got bigger and the creature just stood there curious of the light. Finally Xindi had unleashed the light from his hand they both hit the creature and it was engulfed in flames, for a few seconds it ran around crazily hitting its self trying to put the flames out, then fell to the ground, dead.

The last Guardian was left, this one was just standing but they door watching the fight. Xindi felt weary and dizzy from the loss of blood. The creature ran by Xindi and swung its tail and hit Xindi’s back. Xindi flew to the other side of the room and fell to the ground. He felt like dying but he couldn’t, not here, not after all he went though. Amazingly he stood up and faced the creature. They starred each other down. Then Xindi ran at the creature and lunged on to it. His hands around the creature arms, legs, and its tail, It was entirely un-mobile. The creature began to get hot, and then it started to sweat, soon his entire body started to swell up then Xindi push off as it exploded, Dead.

Xindi collapsed to the ground. Near dead, he starred at the door command. Finally the computer spoke, “Congratulations, you beat the Guardians your are skilled enough to enter the room of light.” As the door opened, a blinding light consumed Xindi, he felt warmth and goodness all around, as the light disappeared he found all his wounds were gone. He was completely heeled.

He got up and walked toward the door, the room past was completely white, the walls the floor and ceiling, the room was huge and empty. All but the Table and the computer in the middle. As he walked toward it he could hear the sounds of his own foot steps, and he felt a trap. Xindi reached the computer and it turned on.

<Welcome to the room of light please enter password _ _ _ _ _ _>
Xindi didn’t know what to do there was no keyboard so he assumed it was voice activated. He just said a random word, “Levithon?”
<Password wrong! System shut down in 10, 9, 8 to over ride shut down sequence please put your blood on the scanner, Jorg>
“Jorg?” Xindi whispered, he realized the computer thought he was jorg,
<5, 4, 3>
He had kept a piece of Jorg’s body for show, and placed it on the scanner,
<3, 2,—Scanning.....Welcome to the room of light, Jorg. What do you want to access?>
“What is there?” Xindi asked the computer
<History, Specks, Armory, Locks, Security, Cameras, Weaponry, Control counsel.>
“This must be the Control room.” Xindi told him self, the computer went on
<Inventory, Crew, Maps, Passwords, Project X>
The last one caught Xindi’s Eyes, “Project X” He said in a loud clear voice,
<Project X file opening.....accessing files, History, Time line, health>
Xindi looked at the screen for a minuet, “History” he said
<History files opening.....Project X was started in 11647, By Jorg, Aim: To create a race of Super beings to answer to my command. Error—all other history lost>
<History, Time Line, Health>
“Time Line”
<Time Line----11647 Project X starts-----11648 First Cells are made from Xindi’s remains-----11758 First Embryo is made-----11759 35 embryos are made-----1196----First Super being is wide awake and Physical.—1196 The Super Being is not taking commands from Jorg, only says will take control from true master—1199 Project x is terminated, rest of the Super Begins are stored in contaminate on a planet -ERROR–ERROR-ERROR-ERROR-Folder Exiting Virus found.>
<Opening Main page>
“Oh my god, these creatures could be my army, I need to find them I need to regain my power. This could make history, but I need to find where they are!”

To be continued....


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Lillith wiped the sweat from her brow, as the bullet was pulled, out. She stared at it in shock. She had been lucky it had been one of the new bio-agent bullets, the warhead had not exploded on impact...

  • 10.03.2004 3:12 PM PDT
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"Immersion is playing Half-Life and not noticing your house is burning down."- Paul Barnett

The most awesome thing ever!

Pat walked onto the bridge, the crew and Martin greeted him."Anything new Martin?""No, things have been oddly peaceful lately, a few ships here and there, nothing more. Hey, where's Lillith?""She got hit in the arm, nothing serious, she's just having it fixed down in the med bay."

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Here's my Prologue:

18 years after the war started, the scouts had already searched hundreds of planets. It would not be long before they would be found...

Dunne had gone missing during the war. Blake continued to fight though, working on lone covert missions, taking vital enemy documents or weapons specifications, or assassinating important generals and leaders in the faceless warrior's army...

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tsp

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Lillith wrapped the bandage herself and left for her quarters to get washed up, and out of her sweat and blood soaked armour.

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Remes orders the fighters to engage enemy ships and keep them from launching fighters.

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Im confuised, is this ending?

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As the fighters streak towards the cruiser, two ships appear out of slipstream, the guns train on the fighters and fire, streaks of blue and green light hit the fighters...

  • 10.03.2004 3:19 PM PDT
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The most awesome thing ever!

No, but it's 18 years into the future.

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A dropship deactivated its active camo and entered the docking bay of Martin's cruiser. The ship landed and Blake stepped out. He wore a black suit and had a sniper rifle in his hand. Blake wiped the sweat from his forehead and walked into the armoury...

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Posted by: Gnome
Im confuised, is this ending?

to get this one war going and the plots, it is now 18 years in the future and there is a on going war between the allies(players) and the Faceless Warrior's army.

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Remes heard the screams of the pilots right before they die and remes says damn you Romulus.

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Lillith after washing and dressing in her casual clothes, she walked towards the bridge.

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After he had finished training for the day, Chronus walked back to his research station. He had long tired of taking the elevators from place to place, it was better to walk. As he plodded aimlesly through the ship decks, he looked out through the expansive windows of the flagship. Every day there was something new to see, as the ship traveled the galaxy in search of enemies to fight.

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A viewscreen opened and there stood a person, he wore black bodyarmour and a red cloak, his black eyes gave away no reflection. "Hello, brother."

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The most awesome thing ever!

Pat sees Lillith enter the bridge,"Ah, you're back. I trust everything went well?"

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The two ships head towards the enemy, from either side...

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Posted by: lieut_pat
No, but it's 18 years into the future.

Gottcha

For 18 years The Levithon has been spoted all around the galixy, Xindi has been searching for the super beings non stop, by him self, many say he's gone made, and others say he died when the tempest was destroyed, but no ones knowns for sure. But they all know if he is still alive, they have something to fear.

Xindi has been alone on the Levithon for 18 years with only about 3 years of sleep. Brinking on Insanity he may have come to the end of his search, 18 years, 120,986,675 planets serched every inch of The Levithon has been looked at, every Gigabyte of history searched and now he may have found them on the ice planet, Guair....

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Lillith looked a little pale, but besides that fine. "Ya, it won't even leave a scar. But, we have to be more careful now." She held up the bullet, her black blood caked on its surface... (brb, got supper)

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Remes says Romulus you will never get away with all of this.

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wow a lot could happen in 4 pages, Anyway is the Super beings idea good or is it crap?

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Blake sighed, putting the sniper rifle in the locker as another soldier sat down to rest. He slammed his fist in the wall, saying, "Dammit, that was a failure." The soldier spoke, "What do you mean? You killed one gener--" "That doesn't matter! I should've gotten both!" Blake yelled.

The soldier stood up and said, "Relax, Blake. You actually did very well considering all of the unknown variables in that mission." Blake sighed again. "I guess you're right." With that, Blake walked out of the armoury towards the bridge...

  • 10.03.2004 3:28 PM PDT