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"Right Lillith."

  • 10.03.2004 3:29 PM PDT
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Blake entered the bridge, his covert black suit still on...

  • 10.03.2004 3:31 PM PDT
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"Ah, hello Blake. How'd the mission go?"

  • 10.03.2004 3:33 PM PDT
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Posted by: Gnome
Anyway is the Super beings idea good or is it crap?


Come on guys please answer this, i got good plots for both ways but im stuck on which way to go....Good, they become my army and <secret>
Bad, they're all dead and Xindi becomes insane that leads to <Secret>

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  • 10.03.2004 3:37 PM PDT
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Blake lowered his head. "...Ok, I guess. I was only able to kill one general. The other managed to escape. There were too many variables that weren't identified in the intel report."

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"Don't get bent out of shape about it, you still got one."

P.S. Gnome, your plot reminds me of the Godsends.

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Remes sends a telapathic message to the man at the com saying trace the feed and give the quardnets to Me and Blake.The crewman sends a telapathic message back saying im on it.

  • 10.03.2004 3:43 PM PDT
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Posted by: lieut_pat
P.S. Gnome, your plot reminds me of the Godsends.


So.....thats bad?
Sorry for taking up so much space away from your plots

  • 10.03.2004 3:45 PM PDT
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Err, not necessarily, it's just been done. You might do better just to side with someone in this mega-war.

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hi back(btw) Romulus put down a code on his shipmaster's chair computer. All the lights turn dim in the ship and the front of the ship opens up... "You will be our first witness, to your end, Remes."

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"Ok. I'm gonna get some rest. They'll inform me when they locate the last one. He's most likely on the run right now."

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Posted by: lieut_pat
Err, not necessarily, it's just been done. You might do better just to side with someone in this mega-war.


Ok thanks, i dont wana do something thats already been done so i'll go the other way.
Gtg Be back tonight or tomarrow after noon

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Lillith put the bullet back in her pocket, "have we gotten any word on how, Romulus's battle group is doing?"

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"Alright Blake. Perhaps I should turn in as well, I didn't get much sleep on that mission. Too much time behind enemy lines, had to be careful."

"Sorry Lillith, we don't have that yet. But we're working on it."

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Remes says not likely brother even if you destroy me you will eventualy recive punishment but that said you aren going to kill me.

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"We shall see..." The ship begins to charge the planet-killer device, Romulus had designed...

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"Alright Pat. Later Lillith." Blake said. He forced a smile, then turned around and walked out of the brig, back to his quarters...

gtg. I'l be back in about an hour.

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Remes yells Target that weapon dont let it fire.Suddenly the ships fire on the weapon and it is destroyed in a brilliant explosion.

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"Damn it," Romulus opens a com, to the warrior. "Our weapon is damaged, repairs will be done in 1 hour, but need support." The other ship puts its weapons to bare on the ships... They fire...

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Remes says evasiv manevers now.The ships dodg the enemy fire just barely and fighters streak twards the enemy fleet dodging enemy AA fire.

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The ship banks to the left, to draw enemy fire, while the other goes behind the cruiser... It targets the engines and fires all main weapons...

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The ships activate there sheilds while the fighters focus on the enemy ships.Remes says target that weapon and fire.The ships concentrate fire on the enemy weapon and it is destroyed in another brilliant explosion.

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"Lillith, Martin, I'll see you later."

Pat walked towards his quarters...

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The lasers punch through the shields, while missiles and shells hit into the engines, plasma ignites the back of the ship aflame... "I think, I will let you die here, Remes. Alone in space." The two ships enter slipstream heading towards their main target a colony world on the edge of the border...

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Lillith goes to one of the lookout points, it was a cavernous area. She sat on a bench and played her flute, the music echoed off the wall. It sounded like Lillith was playing with a group of flutist... The homeplanet below, was a glow of yellow and white light as night desended...

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