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Subject: Laser war:Tempest 2
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Christmas, and that is being hopeful. My graphic novel, is about two characters, they are vamps. One is named Eve one is named Lillith (Aliza in LW) (I took these characters from the graphic novel and put them in LW) they first go out seeking for this one device that is supposed to exterminate humankind, but they find out later, vamps and other non-humans are actually the next step in evolution and this device is actuallya section of the world that the world powers could not contain evolutions so they covered it up. So Eve and Lillith go out to release it.

  • 09.20.2004 12:53 PM PDT
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Posted by: Lil_miz_liz
Wow, like what do you do.

it is a creative writing game. We each have characters/empires and we create plots, play through them, etc.

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o ok.Btw when you said "we finaly started creative wrighting in english" what did you mean by that.

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Posted by: Blue Elite 1000
o ok.Btw when you said "we finaly started creative wrighting in english" what did you mean by that.

we do barely any story writing in english even thought it is english.

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I'm sorry I haven't been on in forever, i've been really busy lately. You know..like any of you care.

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Posted by: coheed
I'm sorry I haven't been on in forever, i've been really busy lately. You know..like any of you care.

luckly for me, school is pretty easy. (btw) Eve looked at Mike and July, "how are you two doing."

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o ok well back to the plot.

Mike looked beside him an saw July sleeping.The remains of the city have sliped into night and the search for survivors and bodies is finished.The fleet bolsterd by the merc's detects a slipstream jump.

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Eve's red eyes, could be seen glowing in the dark, two red dots dissapeard into the dark, behind her...

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Mike says to eve yea im ok nothing but a few flesh wounds(mike sits up on his bed) its july im worryd about.

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"How badly injured is she." Eve asked, her red eyes stopped glowing as she winced. She sat up off the blood coated matress...

[Edited on 9/20/2004 1:01:21 PM]

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FS what planet is Eve on so I can say that instead of saying "the planet" all the time.

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tsp

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The Harp E messenger ship touched down on storm summit. "Sir," from the Harpie who piloted the ship,"A planetary council has been issued. Your presence is requested." So soon, Zalatos thought to himself, it had only been weeks since the last war ended. He sighed and stood up. Oh well, war was his job.

[Edited on 9/20/2004 1:03:03 PM]

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Mike says to eve well there not shure.When the blast hit july was thrown to the west side of the dome in fact its a mirical she is in such good conditon.

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Posted by: Money Marine
FS what planet is Eve on so I can say that instead of saying "the planet" all the time.

She and Aliza are on New Hivez, along with Mike and July.

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Eve as the pain left her body, spoke in a compassionate voice, "I am sure she will be fine, Mike."

[Edited on 9/20/2004 1:04:23 PM]

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Mike says i hope so and limps outside and looks up at 2 of the 7 moons of New Hivez.

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Sweet.

Dwayne returned to the ever familiar New Hivez in his flagship, his computer had picked up someone else here as well, Aliza, Mike, and July. Without that much of a sweat he could eliminate his first victims...

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Eve saw two red eyes, glow beside July's bed. "I am sure, she will do well. She is a strong women." Aliza's voice said out of the darkness. "How are you doing, Eve?" Aliza said in a slightly worried tone. "I have been worse." "Good, I better leave..." The red eyes dissapeared into the night...

[Edited on 9/20/2004 1:07:18 PM]

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Suddenly a reconized enemy fleet comes into view the planetwide sheild goes up with its signiture pop followed by a low hum.My Fleet with the hired merc's get into defenciv positons and the orbitol guns are warmed.

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Aliza saw the shield go up. She ran to her room and changed into her battle clothes. She got her weapons... Eve tried to get out of the bed, but collasped back into it the pain unbearable...

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Aliza walked up to Mike, she walked up behind him. "Mike, what is happining?"

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Mike says we have spoted a known enemy fleet exit slipstrem near New Hivez.

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"If it it knwon, then who is it?" Aliza eyes began to glow brighter in the darkness as her battle sences increased...

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Mike says its Dwayne.

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