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Subject: Laser war: Forshadowing
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(i dont know how to start so it would be real nice if some one could start me....Ex. Then she heard the cry of women named Keratin or something)

  • 09.24.2004 1:46 PM PDT
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Their ship crashed through the atmosphere, it pierced the shield of New Helix. Eve and Aliza saw a building appear through the clouds. They braced themselves. When Eve woke she heard, someone crying in the distance. They had crashed into some sort of apartment... Eve stood up and walked towards the woman(thats your character liz)...

[Edited on 9/24/2004 1:51:05 PM]

  • 09.24.2004 1:50 PM PDT
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so what is the story right now?

  • 09.24.2004 1:51 PM PDT
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Posted by: Spartan 133 aka
so what is the story right now?

Lillith and Pat are searching for the Tempest. Eve and Aliza has escaped from Dwayne's ship still in orbit around New Helix, after a half-successful covert mission.

  • 09.24.2004 1:53 PM PDT
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the predators began to travel to different planets for prey, both big and small, they were cloaked and were runnint on city rooftops when they saw a ship crash somewhere in a building. they ran to investigate it

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Eve crouched down beside the woman. She felt a tingling sensation on her hceel, where bits of electrical wire had fused slightly to her skin, "are you alright?' She asked Aliza walked up beside Eve. Her pant leg ripped and covered in a thin layer of blood.

  • 09.24.2004 2:03 PM PDT
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you know actually, screw my post, i have to leave soon, unless....FS, i've got 3 predators for hire....; )

  • 09.24.2004 2:04 PM PDT
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lol, you know i don't hire, i only ally myself with people.

  • 09.24.2004 2:06 PM PDT
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Aliza sat down, her back against a fire blackened wall, she took off her ammo belt and wrapped it around her leg, stiffling the flow of blood. She looked at the women. She did not look like a civilian...

[Edited on 9/24/2004 2:10:26 PM]

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Eve crouched down beside the woman. She felt a tingling sensation on her hceel, where bits of electrical wire had fused slightly to her skin, "are you alright?' She asked Aliza walked up beside Eve. Her pant leg ripped and covered in a thin layer of blood.


"they...They captured me..."keratin said sobbing to the girl, as Eve was patching up her leg when she heard anoise behind her, Another girl who looked just like Keratin stood pointing two guns at them both then the injured Keratin disapered into thin air...

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Eve and Aliza flipped their guns into their hands. They pointed them at the new girl, "who the hell are you?" Aliza asked...

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Eve and Aliza flipped their guns into their hands. They pointed them at the new girl, "who the hell are you?" Aliza asked...


"My name shall not be spoken by the likes of you." keratin barked at the two girls. I've been sent by my master to kill you both"...

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actually, keep my last post..... the predators walked to the place where they saw the ship crash in.they saw eve and aliza and someone else....they drew their blades

[Edited on 9/24/2004 2:14:36 PM]

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Aliza and Eve smiled, "many have tried before." Eve turned to shadow, she drifted behind the girl. Aliza ran along the wall, firing her sub-machine guns...

[Edited on 9/24/2004 2:18:35 PM]

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Posted by: Spartan 133 aka
actually, keep my last post..... the predators walked to the place where they saw the ship crash in.they saw eve and aliza and someone else

just forget this...

[Edited on 9/24/2004 2:20:29 PM]

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nm

[Edited on 9/24/2004 2:21:24 PM]

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nevermind i know

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The "me" is screwing everthing up...Fallen you go then i'll go after you

[Edited on 9/24/2004 2:26:06 PM]

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Posted by: Lil_miz_liz
The noobie is screwing everthing up...
can't say the "n" word

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Eve turned to shadow and drifted towards the woman. Aliza ran along the wall and kicked a chair at Keratin...

[Edited on 9/24/2004 2:26:39 PM]

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Eve turned to shadow and drifted towards the woman. Aliza ran along the wall and kicked a chair at Keratin...

With a flick of her wrist, the predators got a dazed look on there faces and turned for Aliza with out giving a glimps at karatin, She took both guns and started to shoot at the shadow...

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Aliza spun off the wall over the heads of the predators. Eve formed behind Keratin. "You can't shoot a shadow." She pulled out her kriss' (if you don't know they are swords the curve like a wave.)

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Aliza spun off the wall over the heads of the predators. Eve formed behind Keratin. "You can't shoot a shadow." She pulled out her kriss' (if you don't know they are swords the curve like a wave.)


As the two surrouned her and the perdators strating to regain consisnous "my employer wont like this..."she mumbled and with another flick of her wrist a bright light came out of the ceiling and down on Keratin then disapered, and so was keratin.
(GTG)

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Eve and Aliza looked around, "where the hell did she go?" Eve asked. Aliza shrugged her shoulders... They turned to face the predators...

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"We have to tell Mike what Dwayne is planning." Eve and Aliza turned to shadow and dissapeared from the room. They reformed outside the palace and walked inside to find Mike.

  • 09.24.2004 2:45 PM PDT