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Subject: Laser war: Forshadowing
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Eve looked up at the sky, the snowstorm blocked her view of the dropships. "Well, Eve." Aliza wrapped her arms around Eve. "I think things could get worse." Aliza gave Eve a light kiss on the neck. They sat there looking out at the city...

  • 09.24.2004 5:07 PM PDT
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Lillith stirred in her sleep, she was beginning to wake up...

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As the dropships went past the planet's atmosphere Dwayne radioed all the pilots and Marines on the COM frequency, "When you land, kill anything that moves."

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Eve saw a flash of light through the snowstorm, she gave no heed to it. Her mind slipped back to her nightmare, it was vivid as if it was a memory...

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"That city... burn it to the ground."

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I post sentries every where.

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Aliza saw the pinprick dots on the horizon coming out of the snowstorm, "oh crap." Eve turned she saw them now. They both rushed to the armoury, they were still in the armour. After getting their weapons they ran to try and intercept this incoming force...

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Some dropships attack the city. Dwayne and the Marines land on the outskirts and begin to move in.

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They see the troops on the ground. They rush up to the top of a skyscraper. They placed their scopes on the pulse rifles and aimed...

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Blue flashes could be seen from the top of the skyscraper, as bullets streaked towards the marines...

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Dwayne was leading the attack. "Watch for snipers, spread out, don't kill everyone, remember bargaining tools."

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Eve looked at the crosshairs they pointed at the back of Dwayne's head she pulled the trigger...

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Sorry i needed to use the phone..whats the name of Lillths ship, and the planet eve is on?

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Right before Eve pulled the trigger a marine stepped in back of Dwayne, the bullet hit him in the head. Still, fragments of the bullet knocked Dwayne to the ground. He looked through a scope to the direction of the bullet. "Eve..."

"Marines take that skyscraper, no one will live through this now..."

He ran inside of the skyscraper.

P.S. When Dwayne dies, I imagined it in a more dramatic fashion so I couldnt get him killed now... later though...maybe.

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Posted by: Lil_miz_liz
Sorry i needed to use the phone..whats the name of Lillths ship, and the planet eve is on?

Ship: Nighthawk note Blake and Pat are also on that ship.

Planet: New Helix

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Ya i didn't expect you to die, more of a tool to catch your attention. (btw) Aliza rushed to the door and waited, Eve continued to snipe troops.

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Lillith half opened her eyes, everything was a blur, she mumbled a few inconherent words...

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The door to the roof was locked, so a ignited grenade was placed at the foot of it...

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Aliza heard a beeping sound from the door, she backed up...

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The nade exploded, and Dwayne and his troops rushed out, pulse rifles drawn.

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Aliza fell back hot metal scorching her skin and clothes. She fired at the door, Eve turned around and fired into the smoke...

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Men start fallinvg SMG rounds fly through the air I control all.

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Dwayne rolled out of the way of incoming fire, he put on thermal heat vision and fired at Eve and Aliza.

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Eve lifted Aliza off the ground, she clipped a rope to the edge of the building and jumped. A box hidden in shadow armed itself silently...

  • 09.24.2004 5:35 PM PDT

I've already made the next Laser Wars.Hint,Hint

  • 09.24.2004 5:36 PM PDT