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Subject: Laser war: Forshadowing
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Eve guides July to bench and wipes the tears from her cheeks. She gives off a small smile, "he will be alright." Eve gave her a light hug of reassurance.

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July continues to cry thogh now it is silent.

Mike says to Helix can you give me anymore informaton about this.Helix says no but i promis you this soon you and July will be fully healed.Suddenly mike hears the inacesant beeping of a life moniter.He looked around and saw he was in intensiv care.

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Both Eve and Aliza let out a sigh, "see I told you, he would be fine." Eve said a broad smile on her face.

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July walked over to Mike and sat by him.

Mike did not notic he was still wraped in his thoghts.

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Eve and Aliza left them, to speak in private... They walk outside, they see the explosions in the distance from the battles... "-blam!-, you know. I don't give a damn about the Azrael and Gabriel anymore." Aliza said, "if we are going to die, I don't want to die in vain." She led Eve to her room...

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Mike saw July and says why do they keep attacking.July says im no shure im just glad you are ok and gives him a kiss.

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
" Aliza said, "if we are going to die, I don't want to die in vain." She led Eve to her room...


Nice.

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Posted by: Blue Elite 1000
Posted by: Fallen Seraph
" Aliza said, "if we are going to die, I don't want to die in vain." She led Eve to her room...


Nice.

lol (btw) Eve woke several hours later, she felt the warm breath of Aliza on her neck. The subtle curve of breats rose and fell in her sleep... Eve walked to the window, a light robe wrapped around her bare shoulders. She saw the flashes of light, the lights of battle...

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Mike in those hours was put throgh several medical checks and found out that he had some problem withhis heart and he needed surgery.

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Eve sat down on the window sill. She sipped a glass of wine, the lights of the city lit her eyes, like a thousand stars. Aliza stirred in her sleep, she was having a nightmare...

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FS you need to edit the before last post you got one of the names wrong.

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Posted by: Blue Elite 1000
FS you need to edit the before last post you got one of the names wrong.

damn short story, screwing up where i place the names.

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Mike was whelled into surgery and it began.

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Posted by: Blue Elite 1000
FS you need to edit the before last post you got one of the names wrong.

damn short story, screwing up where i place the names.



lol when will it be finished?

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Aliza woke suddenly from her sleep. "Eve, oh gods... They almost returned." Eve got into the bed, and wrapped ehr arms around the shaking Aliza. "But they did not, did they." Eve brushes a strand of hair out of Aliza's eyes and kissed her lightly on the forehead. "Come lets get dressed and see how Mike is doing."

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Posted by: Blue Elite 1000
Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Posted by: Blue Elite 1000
FS you need to edit the before last post you got one of the names wrong.

damn short story, screwing up where i place the names.



lol when will it be finished?

I have to finish it for school, on monday.

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Mike was wheeled out of surgery he was fine but needed the following day to rest.

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Eve and Aliza dressed in their casual clothing, walked up to July she sat beside the sleeping Mike. "How is he doing?" Aliza asked softly...

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July says to eve he is ok.July says to eve can i tell you something.

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Just Eve or Aliza as well?

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um both i guess

July says please dont tell mike but im...

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Eve and Aliza sat down, they both nodded, "we will keep it a secret." Eve said.

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July says im gonna be a mother.

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Both of them smiled, and gave July a hug. "Thats, wonderful." Aliza said, "why don't you want Mike to know?" Eve asked.

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July says because it will only make him worry more i want to wait as long as i can before i tel him.

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