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A search team finds a destroyed crawler and looked inside.One of the men saw a person inside and says looks like weve got a live one.The search team begins takeing her out into the open for proper identafacation.

  • 09.25.2004 5:23 PM PDT
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Aliza tired to raise her hand, the armour that covered it was shredded, blood covered it and a gaping hole, was in her palm... Her eyes were covered in a layer of blood, the pain could not allow her to think straight, she called out...

  • 09.25.2004 5:24 PM PDT
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this is while im unconscious...

playing on a pair fo swings a young boy can be seen crying over the loss of his father. in the background a blood stained clown lie on the floor his necktwisted at uneven angles a young man can be seen blood staining the grass around him a knife blade sticking up from his spinal cord out of his back. confetti can be seen littering the floor and baloong animals lay ont he blood stained grass. pieces of cake can be found on the ground the chocolate frosting melting as it touches blood. a young woman comes out followe dby police in blue battle armor the women picks up the boy and carries him into the house both of them crying.

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  • 09.25.2004 5:25 PM PDT
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Keratin lowered her ship to 500 meters above the surface and hoverd over Aliza suddenly the white light came down and spread over her, it was gone and so was Aliza, Keratin took off again...

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The search team takes the person out and identifies the person as Aliza citizen of New Hivez.They take her to the med tent for triag and primary care.

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Aliza looked up at the blured images of faces... She felt her body get placed on a stretcher... Why could she not sense Eve, where was she...

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Aliza was blinded by the light... (my internet is slowing down, so it will take longer for me to respond)

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Blake came out of the shop with a bag full of various foods and some ammo, gave it to Lillith and said, "I already have my supplies. Go ahead and get what you need from there."

  • 09.25.2004 5:27 PM PDT
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im waiting for righteous reaper to come back so i can continue making stuff happen

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The medics do there best on Aliza and she is transfered to the medical ship.

  • 09.25.2004 5:28 PM PDT
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as i gain consciousness i can see a man standing infron of me asking why i was on the planet. i try speaking when i wave of pain overcomes me.

  • 09.25.2004 5:29 PM PDT
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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Aliza was blinded by the light... (my internet is slowing down, so it will take longer for me to respond)

Keratin put the ship into slipspace and walked to the back room of the ship and there was Aliza laying down on the ground, Keratin took one of her needles and put it into Alizas neck, "there your shadow abilty is now temperaly disabled"

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Lillith patted, her backpack. "I have all my supplies. Lets go."

  • 09.25.2004 5:29 PM PDT
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Wait who has Aliza!?!

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Ivan continues to attempt to wake the injured soldier "what is your name?? what was your purpose on New Helix??"

Ivan yells for a medic "This guy is out cold. See what you can do!"

The medic goes to work, and Ivan wonders about what happened this day..

  • 09.25.2004 5:30 PM PDT
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Aliza heard the distant voice... She tired to speak, but only blood came out...

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i open my mouth and the only sound htat can be heard is me toppling over and coughing up blood. i keel over and blood splatters well.

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"Alright," Blake said, walking down the dirt road with Lillith following. Blake then spoke, "You think anyone here knows about the Tempest?"

  • 09.25.2004 5:31 PM PDT
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The medical ships take in thousands of wounded Aliza among them.After the destruction the people search for a new planet to inhabit.

  • 09.25.2004 5:32 PM PDT
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tha man keeps nudging me when a medic comes i pass out again unable to do anything about it.

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Aliza heard the distant voice... She tired to speak, but only blood came out...


"damn! i cant let you die, where the hell is my First aid kit!" she quickly started to heal Aliza...

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Lillith shrugged her shoulders...

Aliza wrapped her arms around her legs, she mumured, "Eve."

  • 09.25.2004 5:33 PM PDT
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um isent Aliza on one of my Medical ships.

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Damn! Aliza who has you?!?

  • 09.25.2004 5:34 PM PDT
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BE, Keratin has Aliza.
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The medical ships take in thousands of wounded Aliza among them.After the destruction the people search for a new planet to inhabit.

  • 09.25.2004 5:34 PM PDT