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ok then.

  • 09.25.2004 5:35 PM PDT
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Is eve dead? I really really hope not.. shes one of the main characters.

  • 09.25.2004 5:35 PM PDT
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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
BE, Keratin has Aliza.


Oh buya!!!

anyway.....Sudenly Keratin's ship jumped out of slipspace onto Jorgs secret base, she landed the ship and yelled for a med team, "she's no use dead"

  • 09.25.2004 5:36 PM PDT
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July wept in her room she could not belive Mike was gone.

  • 09.25.2004 5:38 PM PDT
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Posted by: Righteous Reaper
Is eve dead? I really really hope not.. shes one of the main characters.

ah but that is the beauty of the spirit world, we can bring back dead characters. Like Lillith and Pat.

  • 09.25.2004 5:38 PM PDT
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rightous right now don't post so it up to you to prgress my plott and yours

  • 09.25.2004 5:39 PM PDT
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ah but that is the beauty of the spirit world, we can bring back dead characters. Like Lillith and Pat.

cool.

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Aliza heard the voices, and a knife enter her flesh... She woke up a couple hours later. Screaming, she quieted into sobs. "Eve... Eve..."

  • 09.25.2004 5:40 PM PDT
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The fleet under the command of the top generals jumps to several locations until finaly setteling for a stagnet astroid feild with thousands of huge astroids for them to inhabit.

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Jorg saw Aliza's body and ran to Keratin "What the hell happend!!! i told you i wanted her alive,.....this wasn't in a dream..."
"Keratin i couldn't help it the planet she was on was almost destroyed"
"Go help the med. Team"
As Keratin ran after Aliza, Aarlos came up to jorg
"whats the problem, master?"
"Keratin brought back one shadow, nearly dead.....i need you to hold off the invasion untill i know i can take her powers"
"yes, master".....

  • 09.25.2004 5:41 PM PDT
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rightous right now don't post so it up to you to prgress my plott and yours

wait... you said dont post, and then its up to me to progress the plot...

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As Blake got to the end of the street out of town, a lady stopped in their path and said, "Wait, what do you think your doing?" Blake responded, "we just came here to get our supplies. We have to go now."

She stopped them once again and said, "You mustn't leave, or, or they'll get you. Please stay here until tomorrow morning, then it will be safe to go." Blake turned to Lillith and said, "What's going on?" He stood there for a few seconds then spotted something high up in the mountains...

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  • 09.25.2004 5:42 PM PDT
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The workers mine into the astroids creating literaly thousands of easaly defendable citys all ruled by one empire.

  • 09.25.2004 5:43 PM PDT
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Lillith narrowed her eyes, she looked at the mountain. "I guess, we better do as she says."

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Aliza fell back into bed, her tears wetting the pillow...

  • 09.25.2004 5:44 PM PDT
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again unconscious halucinations ....

a young boy and a women cry. weeping over a dead man. hugging each other and wanting it all to end. the little boy starts to weep louder and louder until the women can't take it. she takes a las rifle from a armored police and joins her husband in the spirit world. the boy is left along weeping ofer the loss of his parents.

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oops i guess i did do that my badd i only post for aht echildhood memories brought back by unconsciousness. so i won't know hwere i am.

  • 09.25.2004 5:46 PM PDT
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The astroid citys are completed they are cavernus citys with thousands of pillar shaped buildings reaching from one area to another in the rock and the whole thing was in zero g so moveing around was not that dificult.

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Posted by: Fallen Seraph
Aliza fell back into bed, her tears wetting the pillow...


Suddenly the lights in the room started to dim, and it went ice cold, Jorg had enterd. Aliza was screaming but Jorg paid no attention to that, he placed his two hands on top of each other then in the middle of Aliza'a chest, it felt like the life was being suck out of her, then back in. Jorg backed off and exited the room. Aarlos was waiting there.
"well did you get the powers? master"
"no she's still to week"

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Ivan watches as the medics put the unconcious person into the sick bay of the destroyer, removing his armor. He has several laser wounds that will need treatment.

He then turns and walks to the command bridge. Hades II, his new right-hand AI, was running through various communication systems.

"hades, we need a location on Dwayne's ships."
hades replied "Ships are not found. They could be anywere."

Ivan swore, then prepared his ship for a jump; looking for the only other clue that could help him find the Tempest

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Aliza, cringed with pain... Her body and mind slipped into sleep. Her final thoughts drifted back to her final days beside Eve...

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as the little boys grows up his lefe is filled with a burning hatred. he kills anybody who gets off on his bad side. he kills a teacher and is kicked out of school. he can be seen suffocating another orphan at the orphanage then breaking the boys neck when he is unconscious

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Blake responded, "Right," and turned around. Suddenly, 5 people in dark clothing appeared from a nearby alley and surrounded them. One of them punched Blake to the ground, unsheathed a knife and dove towards him, as did another. Another came up and shot the lady dead, then faced Lillith with a menacing smirk. 3 more surrounded Lillith and unsheathed swords...

  • 09.25.2004 5:51 PM PDT
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Hundreds of citys are constructed in similar fashon each was carved into a larg astroid while the shipyards and cloneing facilitys are put into smaller astroids.Citizens moved in imeadiotly the orbitol guns dispersed throghout the feild.

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the little boy is know a young man in boot camp he is a dilinquit and a convict who needs to be learned a lesson. his drill sergeant gets him mad and the boy tries killing him only to get knocked unconscious and shot in the legs by the sergeant

  • 09.25.2004 5:52 PM PDT