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Subject: Laser war: the search for the Tempest
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The tank cruised over the uneven cavern floor, until, they finally found the metallic entrance to their destination: the Original Haven.

Once, Haven had been a thriving jungle world. It's population had lived in relative peace for over a millenium, each faction making sure the other would be kept in check, for nuclear weapons were in abundance: if someone fired a misslie, mutual destruction had been guaranteed.

At long last, there came such a day.
Now, the abandoned halls of their great city, buried beneath the sand, were believed to have contained information on the Tempest. That was Ivan's goal.

  • 09.26.2004 2:29 PM PDT
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nvm

[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:31:13 PM]

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Aliza ripped off the enviro-suit. She looked around her at the dead bodies, her blood lust rose... Her vampire instincts took over...

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n/v

[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:45:56 PM]

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"Ok, I'll be down ASAP."

He grabbed his equipment and started the decent into the darkness...

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Posted by: blue elite 1000The troops followed the path Ivan took almost twice as fast as Ivan did and they quickly catched up with him.

does anyone here think that this is god-moding? just a bit? how do they even know were I am? are there not man other entrances to the caves? how did they get there so fast?

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Blake walked beside Lillith in the elevator, looking at the many floors there were in the ship as they descended. "You think they abandoned it when they crashed? There could be some opposition."

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Lillith hit the floor, she entered a huge hall, it was overgrown with plants...

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n/v

[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:47:20 PM]

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Pat sees the elevator come back up, gets on and heads down towards Blake and Lillith...

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Aliza looked at a map and headed towards the bridge, mangled bodies left in her wake...

Lillith did not speak, she kept her pulse rifle raised. She saw what looked like a airlock ahead...

[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:35:15 PM]

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Pat arrived at Blake and Lillith's position and followed them...

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Posted By: BLue Elite 1000
ever hear of genetic enhancements.


you're saying that they walked? thats inherent god-moding.

Dont make stuff up as you go along, just to rationalize the other stuff that dosnt make sense...

while your at it, why dont you just kill ivan by looking at him? it would make things a lot easier.


[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:37:10 PM]

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Lillith began to push the heavy airlock doors out of the way...

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Blake followed Lillith with his SMG ready...

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n/v

[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:46:26 PM]

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ok fine my troops arent there they are scoueringthe surface of the planet.

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Pat checked his rifle, full ammo. He waited for Lillith to push the doors down...

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Aliza entered a elevator, it headed towards the bridge, she had in her hand a hacker bot. She planned to hack Ivan's AI. Her body and hair dripped with blood of her fallen foe's her eyes flared red...

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start making sense, man! im not even going to try and quote you any more, if you cant see theres gonna be a battle between Ivan and Aliza and Pat and Blake and everyone else from a mile away, you need to retake reading comprehension.

update: sorry about the excessive flaming.

[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:41:03 PM]

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Lillith pushed the door down. Before them was what looked like a ancient city, the airlock was the doorway to a separate ecosystem...

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i changed it they are not there sorry.

edit:sorry for the whatever you called it.

[Edited on 9/26/2004 2:41:52 PM]

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Aliza walked into the bridge of Ivan's ship...

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Ivan's tank finally slowed and grinded to a halt: the vegetation had gunked up the treads, and they were coming apart. "okay everybody, lets go!" Ivan yelled.

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The troops on the surface com'd Lillith and pat asking if they found anything.

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