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Subject: this is a short fanfic i wrote
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Poll: did you like it  [closed]
yes, make more:  27%
(3 Votes)
no, you suck:  73%
(8 Votes)
Total Votes: 11

Two brutes are walking through small canyon to make sure that all elites' in the area are dead. When they turn a corner into a wide opening they hear a quick movement right behind them. In a split second one brute falls to the ground in two pieces bleeding onto the grass around him. The second brute looks up only to see the newly revealed arbiter with an activated energy sword, jump back and pull a plasma grenade out of his back compartment and activate it. The brute raises his custom plasma rifle and can only let out two quick shots before the plasma lands on his helmet. The brute quickly takes off his helmet and throws it at where the arbiter was only a second before. The helmet explodes harmlessly on the wall of the canyon. The brute looks around in confusion and notices the arbiter right above him just in time to see the energy sword plunge into his chest and travel up to his face. The arbiter takes one look around to make sure the area is secure and walks away with his camouflage reactivated, leaving the two brutes behind without another thought.

If you guys like this tell me

[Edited on 5/23/2006]

  • 05.23.2006 2:34 PM PDT
Subject: this is a battle between the arbitor and two brutes that i wrote
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Ehhh...... make sure you catch misspellings, and don't tell what it's about in the title. Otherwise, it was pretty good.

EDIT: Oh, and why would the brute's helmet explode?

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  • 05.23.2006 2:57 PM PDT
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*cough*

crap

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  • 05.23.2006 2:58 PM PDT
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Wait, what'd he cut the Brute with...? Assuming it was a plasma sword, how is he bleeding....You know, searing super heated plasma...bleeding...? What about the cauterization of the wound?

  • 05.23.2006 3:01 PM PDT
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his helmit would explode cus the plasma landed on it

and oh well i was bored when i wrote , i guess i won't make more then less things change
no harm done

he would bleed becuase he was cut in two and yes it was an energy sowrd

[Edited on 5/23/2006]

  • 05.23.2006 3:01 PM PDT