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Subject: Watch my Halo Reach Machinima, "Deric and Eric", on Youtu...

Co creator of MIA and Co founder of Spartan Armada.

I've been told that this was the correct forum to post my thread. Please don't send any hate posts. I've had enough of that. I don't mind negative feed back as long as you tell me how I could be better. Right now we have 4 episodes and I think episode 4 is the best so far. Again, please don't be haters.

  • 03.23.2012 3:26 PM PDT

Co creator of MIA and Co founder of Spartan Armada.

And if you can't find it, just type "Deric and Eric" in the search bar. Watch all 4 and tell me what you think.

  • 03.23.2012 3:35 PM PDT

If you don't even bother to link it then why should we watch it?

  • 03.23.2012 4:52 PM PDT

Co creator of MIA and Co founder of Spartan Armada.

Sorry. I don't know how to link it, but if you go to you tube and search "Deric and Eric", they should be the first to pop up.

  • 03.23.2012 5:12 PM PDT

Co creator of MIA and Co founder of Spartan Armada.

I just checked my videos and they say that many people have disliked them. I just want you to know that on each of them have only one or two dislikes. If you like the video, please click the like button so I can get a little more views. I just don't think it looks good when it says 100% dislike it when only one person has disliked it. Thanks.

  • 03.23.2012 6:19 PM PDT

Check out my machinimas,montages, and other fun works at Sock Box Productions.

Not going to lie but the fact that you can't see the obvious structure links (Text Formatting Legend) right under the message box makes me feel that you do not have the capacity to make a good video.

Watched it and here is why everyone dislikes them...
1st video:
-The video quality is less than what a standard TV puts out
-The sound of water stops every shot (use 2 audio tracks)

2nd video:
-Same problems as above
-A shot should be only about 4-5 seconds long MAX

3rd Video:
-Same problems as above
-Stopped watching because the story was so bad

4th Video:
-The video quality is less than what a standard TV puts out
-The sound of water stops every shot (use 2 audio tracks)

Overall:
-Would it kill you to write a decent story that doesn't make me think of garbage cartoons
-Get some friends and have them do the different voices
-Take ANY video or tv productions class to get some editing skills

  • 03.24.2012 7:37 AM PDT


Posted by: ThePunisher10282
Not going to lie but the fact that you can't see the obvious structure links (Text Formatting Legend) right under the message box makes me feel that you do not have the capacity to make a good video.

Watched it and here is why everyone dislikes them...
1st video:
-The video quality is less than what a standard TV puts out
-The sound of water stops every shot (use 2 audio tracks)

2nd video:
-Same problems as above
-A shot should be only about 4-5 seconds long MAX

3rd Video:
-Same problems as above
-Stopped watching because the story was so bad

4th Video:
-The video quality is less than what a standard TV puts out
-The sound of water stops every shot (use 2 audio tracks)

Overall:
-Would it kill you to write a decent story that doesn't make me think of garbage cartoons
-Get some friends and have them do the different voices
-Take ANY video or tv productions class to get some editing skills


Pretty much this. With my capture card, I have the same background noise-jumping problem, but it's easy to work around.

  • 03.24.2012 9:21 AM PDT

Co creator of MIA and Co founder of Spartan Armada.

Thanks for the feed back on my videos but now that I see how many dislikes I have, I've decided to delete the videos from my account. I will still be making machinima and hopefully work around the audio skipping. Me and my brother are currently working on the idea of creating a more serious story line. But before that we will do something random like "Stick Figures on Crack" or "Stick Figure Randomness" but in Halo Reach. I appreciate your feed back and I will hopefully make my machinimas better.

  • 03.24.2012 9:38 AM PDT