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Subject: Dear Bungie Community,
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I've lost the ability to express,
Thoughts are nothing but a jumbled mess.
I'm surprised at how time moulds you,
I'm awed at how life holds you.

Hands draw you back and keep you glued to the ground,
Chain you with reality; gnaw at you like a hound.

Time heals your sour wounds but leave a deep scar,
To remind you of those failures you have accumulated so far.
You've to suppress your voice when you want to cry,
Shadows don't leave you no matter how hard you try.

An emptiness fills your whole being,
You wonder how to escape this wretched feeling.
You await a small opening from inside the closed doors,
A share of sun, a ray that's your.

When, Why how your being was transformed,
Who is this stranger in the reflection,
Your mirror has formed.

Suffocating is this alien personality,
You dread to open eyes and accept the reality,
Don't give in and accept your fate,
Only a Mythic would see otherwise.

  • 04.01.2012 5:54 PM PDT

Join Mythic Photographers We are amazing at taking screenshots.

"I'm toight like a toiger "
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The Great Pretenders choice of Internet tabs and themes.

Thanks for that... riveting poem.

  • 04.01.2012 5:55 PM PDT

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Posted by: camo m0nkey
Thanks for that... riveting poem.

  • 04.01.2012 5:55 PM PDT
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Positive vibes.

Nicely said, man.

^_^

  • 04.01.2012 5:58 PM PDT
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Walk up to her quietly from behind and breathe heavily on the back of her neck and whisper "amore"

Their next game better have rocket boots!

I made that up.

I read it four times and i still don't understand.

  • 04.01.2012 5:59 PM PDT

This is the way the world ends,
This is the way the world ends,
This is the way the world ends;
Not with a bang but a whimper.

I'd like to point out your name is a lie. Thus your poem cannot be trusted.

  • 04.01.2012 6:01 PM PDT

In a time long past, the armies of the dark came again to the lands of men. Their leaders became known as the fallen lords, and their terrible sorcery was without equal in the west.
In 30 years they reduced the civilized nations into carrion and ash. Until the free city of Madrigal alone defined them. An army gathered there, and a desperate battle was joined against the fallen
Heros were born in the fire and bloodshed of the wars which followed and their names and deeds will never be forgotten


Posted by: Halo Quintilogy
I read it four times and i still don't understand.


Good thing my college English did a semester on Poetry. ^_^

  • 04.01.2012 6:03 PM PDT

HSC Clan Leader. About us: We like competitive gameplay,clan tournaments in which you can win prizes,and competitive clan battles. We aslo enjoy playing as a clan online. Our main games are Black Ops 2 and Halo 4. HSC is undefeated in clan battles and likes to recruit mature members. If your interested in joining,pm me or message me over xbox. GT: galacticjedi2.

website:

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Posted by: A Mythic Member
I've lost the ability to express,
Thoughts are nothing but a jumbled mess.
I'm surprised at how time moulds you,
I'm awed at how life holds you.

Hands draw you back and keep you glued to the ground,
Chain you with reality; gnaw at you like a hound.

Time heals your sour wounds but leave a deep scar,
To remind you of those failures you have accumulated so far.
You've to suppress your voice when you want to cry,
Shadows don't leave you no matter how hard you try.

An emptiness fills your whole being,
You wonder how to escape this wretched feeling.
You await a small opening from inside the closed doors,
A share of sun, a ray that's your.

When, Why how your being was transformed,
Who is this stranger in the reflection,
Your mirror has formed.

Suffocating is this alien personality,
You dread to open eyes and accept the reality,
Don't give in and accept your fate,
Only a Mythic would see otherwise.




Is this poetry.

[Edited on 04.04.2012 11:36 AM PDT]

  • 04.04.2012 11:35 AM PDT
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Not a big fan of couplets...I would have preferred at least alternating rhyme. I can't read couplets like a gentle poem...I always picture some dude rapping when I read poems arranged in couplets.

  • 04.04.2012 11:41 AM PDT

HSC Clan Leader. About us: We like competitive gameplay,clan tournaments in which you can win prizes,and competitive clan battles. We aslo enjoy playing as a clan online. Our main games are Black Ops 2 and Halo 4. HSC is undefeated in clan battles and likes to recruit mature members. If your interested in joining,pm me or message me over xbox. GT: galacticjedi2.

website:

clan.iclanwebsites.com/hauntedspartans/


Posted by: A Mythic Member
I've lost the ability to express,
Thoughts are nothing but a jumbled mess.
I'm surprised at how time moulds you,
I'm awed at how life holds you.

Hands draw you back and keep you glued to the ground,
Chain you with reality; gnaw at you like a hound.

Time heals your sour wounds but leave a deep scar,
To remind you of those failures you have accumulated so far.
You've to suppress your voice when you want to cry,
Shadows don't leave you no matter how hard you try.

An emptiness fills your whole being,
You wonder how to escape this wretched feeling.
You await a small opening from inside the closed doors,
A share of sun, a ray that's your.

When, Why how your being was transformed,
Who is this stranger in the reflection,
Your mirror has formed.

Suffocating is this alien personality,
You dread to open eyes and accept the reality,
Don't give in and accept your fate,
Only a Mythic would see otherwise.



Are you saying this is a rap.

  • 04.04.2012 11:52 AM PDT

I lack the relevance of this.

  • 04.04.2012 12:01 PM PDT