- Blackhalos99
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Posted by: krnlcheese
I liked it but I didn't like that the Spartans would cry when the girl died, etc. It just made them feel well in simpler terms "not spartan." But overall it was a good read.
This story was meant to show a more human side of the Spartans and through it the emotions that come with it. even though they are super-soldiers forged for war, they still are human.
That's why I did that because most stories don't have the emotional aspect of that and make them be too cliche, as in emotionless behemoths gunning down the enemies and taking losses without even flinching.
Too many have forgotten they are still human.
So that's why.