- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Really good, except you gotta improve the overall HUD parts, like the shield car and the motion sensor, to make it look next-gen and unique.
Also, be sure to take out the MC from that picture, you can easily see him in the background. Maybe move the plasma explosion to cover him up?
PS: Don't criticize my English please, It's my third language.