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Subject: Too soon DeeJ, too soon
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One does not choose a destiny, his destiny is bestowed, shaped and formed, from the soul.

You kinda locked the thread a bit early :( I'm sure alot of us were about to submit ours.

"We are wide open to attack!" shouted the team leader. "All available units, prepare to ________________________..." and before our senior officer could finish his sentence I watched as a bullet pierced his chest, collapsing him to the floor. The yells of my comrades and the whizzing of bullets echoed throughout the storm encased forest, it was an ambush. The raining bullets were equal to the amount of droplets falling from the heavens above. As silence over took the forest once again, the steam from my barrel and my steadfast finger on the trigger once again awaited the next attack from the enemy who waits on the other side of the dense fog, only the gods can save us now.

[Edited on 05.15.2012 1:23 PM PDT]

  • 05.15.2012 1:12 PM PDT

There was already enough entries. Any more and it would take him twice as long to get through them.

[Edited on 05.15.2012 1:15 PM PDT]

  • 05.15.2012 1:14 PM PDT
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One does not choose a destiny, his destiny is bestowed, shaped and formed, from the soul.


Posted by: Mythical Wolf
There was already enough entries. Any more and it would take him twice as long to get through them.


Mine was a winner and I'm usually not confident about anything. Eh, I'll get'em next time

  • 05.15.2012 1:16 PM PDT

There's always next time. You mind posting your story anyways? I actually enjoyed reading them.

  • 05.15.2012 1:16 PM PDT

In a time long past, the armies of the dark came again to the lands of men. Their leaders became known as the fallen lords, and their terrible sorcery was without equal in the west.
In 30 years they reduced the civilized nations into carrion and ash. Until the free city of Madrigal alone defined them. An army gathered there, and a desperate battle was joined against the fallen
Heros were born in the fire and bloodshed of the wars which followed and their names and deeds will never be forgotten


Posted by: Mythical Wolf
There was already enough entries. Any more and it would take him twice as long to get through them.


There were a lot longer than 4 sentences also.

  • 05.15.2012 1:18 PM PDT
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Posted by: Synyster Ricz
There's always next time. You mind posting your story anyways? I actually enjoyed reading them.


Sure, thank god I remembered it, it was rather poetic

  • 05.15.2012 1:18 PM PDT


Posted by: spartain ken 15


Yeah I know. :/

  • 05.15.2012 1:20 PM PDT

Key

It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?

  • 05.15.2012 1:22 PM PDT
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Posted by: CrazzySnipe55
It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?


It had to be good. And I posted mine on the op, to bad it didn't go through

  • 05.15.2012 1:23 PM PDT

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Posted by: CrazzySnipe55
It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?
I think it took a bit longer trying to create an original post that made sense. At least, I hope that's why it took so long

:-)

  • 05.15.2012 1:25 PM PDT

Posted by: CrazzySnipe55
It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?

Four sentences is like, uber hard, dude. I doubt this reply will be four sentences long. Man, screw sentences.


I enjoyed the story a lot for four sentences. A bit of a shame it's not submitted, but even still, great job.

EDIT: It's technically five but who's counting?

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  • 05.15.2012 1:30 PM PDT
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Posted by: DEATHPIMP72
Anyone but Foman. He smells like cheese.

Sorry, I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.

  • 05.15.2012 1:31 PM PDT

In a time long past, the armies of the dark came again to the lands of men. Their leaders became known as the fallen lords, and their terrible sorcery was without equal in the west.
In 30 years they reduced the civilized nations into carrion and ash. Until the free city of Madrigal alone defined them. An army gathered there, and a desperate battle was joined against the fallen
Heros were born in the fire and bloodshed of the wars which followed and their names and deeds will never be forgotten


Posted by: x Foman123 x
Sorry, I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.


1/10

  • 05.15.2012 1:31 PM PDT


Posted by: x Foman123 x


That's a Photoshop edited image. I can tell by the different pixels.

  • 05.15.2012 1:32 PM PDT


Posted by: spartain ken 15

Posted by: x Foman123 x
Sorry, I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.


1/10

6/10

  • 05.15.2012 1:32 PM PDT

Key


Posted by: defnop552
Posted by: CrazzySnipe55
It took you that long to construct 4 sentences?
I think it took a bit longer trying to create an original post that made sense. At least, I hope that's why it took so long

:-)
I constructed mine in the span of about 15 minutes while being distracted by television. Just sayin'.

  • 05.15.2012 1:34 PM PDT
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Posted by: x Foman123 x
Sorry, I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.


Seems legit

  • 05.15.2012 1:34 PM PDT
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One does not choose a destiny, his destiny is bestowed, shaped and formed, from the soul.

So is it good?

  • 05.15.2012 1:35 PM PDT

Please stop complaining about the 'death of a loved one' it's my job. They probably deserved it anyways. Here's a warning, if you keep making pentagrams out of the neighbors livestock I will personally come to your house and kill everyone you love. Now leave me alone, I got to get back to work.
~M.D~

It took me 30 secs tops, it's for fun, it's not like your lives depended on your submission.

  • 05.15.2012 1:54 PM PDT
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Now you can copy-paste for the next contest. Because I'm sure it's generic enough ;)

  • 05.15.2012 2:14 PM PDT

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Posted by: x Foman123 x
Sorry, I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.


Haha this is actually pretty Funny if you ask me

  • 05.15.2012 2:17 PM PDT

Posted by: x Foman123 x
Sorry, I'm afraid it's my fault that he ended the contest.

So realistic! You should enter the Photoshop contests, too!

  • 05.15.2012 2:17 PM PDT

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Bricypoo's custom user title = Ultra Lame Thread Maker


Posted by: True Underdog
Only after we ban Bricypoo.

I don't understand this thread, but I haven't posted in a while so... here is my post. Take it or leave it.

  • 05.15.2012 2:20 PM PDT
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SPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!

Foamy likes himself too much I think. I should come up with a way to knock him down a few levels. Perhaps implying that him mom is obsessed with carnality will do the trick. Its at least never been tried before.

OT: Obligatory pseudo on topic comment so that its not quite so easy to accuse me of not only placating and tolerating a derailment, but also actively participating in one. I am a genius. No one will ever see through this tactic.

  • 05.15.2012 2:23 PM PDT
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Posted by: evilcam
Foamy likes himself too much I think. I should come up with a way to knock him down a few levels. Perhaps implying that him mom is obsessed with carnality will do the trick. Its at least never been tried before.

OT: Obligatory pseudo on topic comment so that its not quite so easy to accuse me of not only placating and tolerating a derailment, but also actively participating in one. I am a genius. No one will ever see through this tactic.


It's so effective that you just confused me

  • 05.15.2012 2:25 PM PDT

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