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"What are we holding on to, Sam?"
"That there's some good in this world, and it's worth fighting for."
Posted by: Colossal Dave
He unlockded his seat belt and he looked out the window into the spase outsied. It intreeged him and he was like "Wow it looks cool out thar mayb some day I can take my old frends to spase with me."
Are you kidding me...
Is english your first language?
See, this is why I hate fan fiction. If English is your first, second, or third language, there is no excuse for writing that poor. Outside of the fact that the grammar and spelling are simply terrible, the..........actually, I really don't think this is necessary. Sorry. Bad writing bugs me, and I usually feel the need to tell everyone about it. At least I got a good laugh out of that quote.