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  • 06.13.2012 8:37 PM PDT

You have two run on sentences, and in the first one you capitalized a work that you shouldn't have.

"We, Or I, want you to join, this group needs new members."

"Or" should be "or" and the comma after "join" makes the sentence a run on. You can replace it with a semi-colon, or make it two different sentences.
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"Anyone who constantly uses improper grammar will be banned on the spot, and I am not talking about one mistake, over and over, I mean mistake after mistake in the same sentence."

Lets see... Massive run on sentence. I would separate into two different sentences after "spot". Also, after the phrase "over and over" you cannot have a comma, incorrect grammar. That would require a semi-colon.

I think you may have to ban yourself for that last sentence. Two different mistakes in one sentence; which by your standards is grounds for banning. Tsk Tsk :)

  • 06.13.2012 9:40 PM PDT

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Posted by: Nikitamail2
You have two run on sentences, and in the first one you capitalized a work that you shouldn't have.

"We, Or I, want you to join, this group needs new members."

"Or" should be "or" and the comma after "join" makes the sentence a run on. You can replace it with a semi-colon, or make it two different sentences.
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"Anyone who constantly uses improper grammar will be banned on the spot, and I am not talking about one mistake, over and over, I mean mistake after mistake in the same sentence."

Lets see... Massive run on sentence. I would separate into two different sentences after "spot". Also, after the phrase "over and over" you cannot have a comma, incorrect grammar. That would require a semi-colon.

I think you may have to ban yourself for that last sentence. Two different mistakes in one sentence; which by your standards is grounds for banning. Tsk Tsk :)


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  • 06.13.2012 9:56 PM PDT

"Wow, you no life."
I'm not sure whether or not you are trying to say "Wow, you have no life." or "Wow, you know life."

And lol, you think I actually read what you had to say besides the grammar sentences? Lol you're funny.

  • 06.14.2012 8:52 AM PDT

Lol I just troll on threads every once in a while

  • 06.14.2012 9:53 AM PDT