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Subject: TFU Story

Hey guys, I write a story too, like most of you guys here I bet. Its nothing big or anything, but I write it from the point of view in the opposite clan of SRT from a spartan named TJ. Its a work int he process and feel free to tell me what needs to be better and such and such. Feel free to read the first 7 chapters of the second book, its not something where you have to read the first book to understand. Feel free to tell me what I should improve on (I know I need a wider vocabulary) and what you really like. I am in need of a Grammar -blam!-/Editor though to my grammar is greatly off and the structure is in wack right now. I write new chapters every week, and the site is constantly updated. The link for the site is www.tfustory.webs.com It is also available to mobile devices! I just do this for fun, but I would like to write a novel and get published one day.

  • 07.15.2012 11:40 PM PDT
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deej pls

I don't think you wrote it. The OP is so bad, but the story is so good

  • 07.16.2012 12:10 AM PDT

I promise you I wrote it, and sorry I don't exactly get what you mean when you say the OP is bad, OP stands for original post correct?

  • 07.16.2012 9:02 PM PDT

Aspiring filmmaker


Posted by: tjkskateboarder
I promise you I wrote it, and sorry I don't exactly get what you mean when you say the OP is bad, OP stands for original post correct?


Correct.

  • 07.16.2012 11:55 PM PDT