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Halo multiplayer sucks!

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Halo 2 > Halo 3 ODST > Halo 3 > Reach/CE tied

OP, I don't know about any other users, but seeing your hostile reaction to criticism has kind of put me off reading your fic. You could have just countered awj's points in a civilised manner rather than acting, frankly, immature.

You will probably flame me for this, but oh well

[Edited on 08.31.2012 5:49 PM PDT]

  • 08.31.2012 5:47 PM PDT

Ha, Wow... There be some fine flaming about!

To Omega: I have written a Fan fiction myself (the first of my stories which I have let a group of people read), so I completely understand how hard it is to post it. Seriously.

As far as the technical structuring goes, DangerWasp was right... It is really difficult to create proper paragraphs here in the forums (especially when copy/pasting from word or openoffice), so I really wouldn't sweat that too much.

As far as getting indignant over criticisms... I get that too! Really, it is difficult to hear negative (even if they are intended to be constructive) thoughts about your work.

When writing Haunted, I got many positive comments, and was thrilled. However, when the first negative comment rolled in, I was quite dismayed... Trust me, no matter how great your story is, there will always be somebody who doesn't care for it (see: my relationship with Stephen King's works).

Take my advice: Keep with it! I have only read a little bit of it, but it seems like a good enough story. I will keep reading it if you keep on posting it.

If you do want any pointers, I have created a thread for writing tips over at Halo;s new site. IT's called a community writing clinic, and it is in the community creations forum. Give it a look if you can dig it out of the thousands of threads over there.

Also, my story, Haunted is here on the site. Feel free to give it a look, just to see another style. Maybe it will help. Good luck!

  • 08.31.2012 8:13 PM PDT

Et Eärello Endorenna utúlien.
Sinome maruvan ar Hildinyar.
tenn' Ambar-metta!

That was an interesting reading indeed.

  • 08.31.2012 8:35 PM PDT


Posted by: MasterSin
That was an interesting reading indeed.
Stories are built by the survivors, the truth is buried in the layers of Obsidian.

What does that mean? Only the teller will know, unless his mind deems others worthy.

The Criticizer is always the most ignorant, the 'retaliater' is speaking with ego, never with mind.

The Criticizer offends because it is what he means to do, the Halo Universe will never be the same because of them.

But trolls, they're just retarded.

Story is alright, however there's a lot of flaws in the plot line, I'd suggest scrapping it and starting over, because we all know that despite everything that has gone wrong with your Fan-fiction is that you can do better, and can only get better.

  • 09.01.2012 9:13 PM PDT

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