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Subject: This is my ending to Halo 3 Chp. 1
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My ending....

Chapter 1:

1531 hours, December 17, 2552(revised date,
Military Calendar)\Aboard UNSC landing craft (unknown name),
near shore of Dar es Salaam,Tanzania, Africa

A storm is formming over this forsacen place as a war rages between Humanity and the alien group known as the Covenant.
There's the Master Chief heading to shore in a landing craft(boat used to to transport troops in WW 2 Pic. link http://history.acusd.edu/cdr2/WW2Pics2/82633.jpg (D-Day in CoD2)). (goes into HUD view) An ODST is at the front of the craft is giving a speech to the rest of the group. All of the sudden the boat next to them explodes into a blue flame. A Covenant mortar round just barly mississ the craft splashing water into the air and rocking the craft violently. A sqaudren of Banshee fly over head. The ODST leader screams, "Everyone get your heads down,now!". The Bashees comes down on the craft hard. The ODST next to John(MC) srceams in pain after taking several hits. "Get the Medic over here now!" someone yelled.
The craft finally hits shore all the troops rush out, John grabs the wounded solider and carries him to shore. He then lays the solider down by a rock so the Medic can take a look at him. The Marines and ODSTs work together as they help each other climb up the steep leeg with grappeling ropes. A Marine walks over to John and says,"Sir, all of the other Spartans made it. Follow me so you so link up with them." John follows the Marine and he spots Linda, James, Kelly, and a couple of Spartans that he doesn't wrecognize. All of the Spartans do a crisp salute to John as he aproches. John, Kelly, James, and Linda all exchange thier welcoming by drawing a smily face with thier finger on thier visors.
Three dots apeer on John's HUD. "It's nice to see you again Sir.", said Linda over the Spartans private link. "Its been a long time.", said John. "It sure has",said James, "look at this new Mark VI armor. That old Mark V armor almost fell apart when they took it off hehe." Then Johnson contacts John through his HUD intercom system. "Chief tell your Spartans to get thier gear and get thier -blam- up here and (a large explosion in the background). "We could use the help." "Yes,sir." said John, "Alright Spartans you heard the man, grab your gear and get up there ASAP." "Sir yes sir!" said the Spartans in unison.
Kelly, Linda, and James grab thier gear and follow John to a grapalling rope. John begins to climb then Linda and so on. They finaly make it to the top and before them they see Phantoms touching down dropping off Elites, grunts, and even Hunters so that they could fight with Humans side by side.

  • 06.17.2006 11:08 AM PDT
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What do guys think?

  • 06.17.2006 11:21 AM PDT
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Posted by: MasterChief 0722


Stopped reading there.

  • 06.17.2006 12:00 PM PDT

Posted by: CaptainRidley
Posted by: MasterChief 0722


Stopped reading there.

Same

  • 06.17.2006 12:02 PM PDT
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Posted by: CaptainRidley
Posted by: MasterChief 0722


Stopped reading there.

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Pretty good.

^yeah that doesnt sound like a ending

[Edited on 6/17/2006]

  • 06.17.2006 12:04 PM PDT
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What the... That doesn't make any sense. You're taking the Normandy scenario and customizing it to fit Halo? And what's with the links and outside references? This is your story, and you CAN'T be so lame you can't bear to describe it with your own words. And what's with "HUD view"? It's in text! There IS no perspective!

  • 06.17.2006 12:05 PM PDT