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Subject: Atramentous - A Halo Reach Horror Film

A Halo Reach Horror Film, Sanctuary in the darkness?

Best watched with headphones and full screen.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8wgQSRSrMEE

  • 08.08.2012 4:36 AM PDT

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Not bad OP. Just some constructive critisism, work on making the camera less jerky in the first half. Other than that, great job!

  • 08.08.2012 5:01 AM PDT

Posted by: DE4THINC4RN4TE
Not bad OP. Just some constructive critisism, work on making the camera less jerky in the first half. Other than that, great job!


DE4THINC4RN4TE,

Thanks a lot mate and I see what you mean by jerking camera but at points I was trying to jerk it on purpose but not right at the beginning so I will try and work on that in future. Its great to receive feedback and advice, yet again thanks.

  • 08.08.2012 5:31 AM PDT
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  • 08.14.2012 8:30 PM PDT

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constructive criticism- add audio, if i was directing I would have add lines. Sorry but there is no story there for not interesting.

The whole video is just some guy(witch you have no idea who he is) walking around.

Where it seems like you are trying to make good suspenseful moments are ruined by not so great camera angles.

Sorry if this is not what you wanted to see and hope you keep trying.

  • 08.14.2012 8:49 PM PDT