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Subject: Cpt. J. Keyes draw

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So I made Cpt. Jacob Keyes with my pen pad, what do you guys think about it?

  • 08.31.2012 8:40 PM PDT
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Is that a shadow or did he piss himself?

Just joking, It's great.

  • 08.31.2012 11:31 PM PDT

What a waste....


Posted by: Habah
Is that a shadow or did he piss himself?

Just joking, It's great.
Yeah, that shadow is a little weird...

But otherwise it's pretty good. The legs could use less shading, and I think the eyes and nose should be a tad larger, but awesome nonetheless. The sharp angles are good compared to the inner, sweeping curves.

[Edited on 08.31.2012 11:42 PM PDT]

  • 08.31.2012 11:41 PM PDT

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Yeah I know, but yes, it's shadowing. I'm still learning how to make a better shadowing.

Or!

He saw the covenant and just pissed himself?

[Edited on 09.01.2012 4:49 AM PDT]

  • 09.01.2012 4:49 AM PDT

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Posted by: Habah
Is that a shadow or did he piss himself?

Just joking, It's great.

This^

  • 09.01.2012 4:55 PM PDT

Looks like he just woke up from a hangover and pissed himself while he was sleeping.

IF that what was what was drawn here today, it looks great.

Without the piss he'd look great.

And what's with his shirt? It's too small in length, it looks like a womans shirt, UNSC Fatigues are usually tucked in aren't they?

another thing to note is your 'light source' it's kinda screwy and comes from the top and right side. BUT, the left sides of your legs are also illuminated fully, the bottoms of your legs are strangely fading to a darker shade of grey.

-rubs chin-

On the other hand, the leg that is in front of the back leg should have the least shown shading and the back leg's right side should be shaded.


Dear god, this is a mind -blam!- to look at. It's So 2d but 3d at the same time.

The Hip is too small on 'our' right side.


As for the shading of the right arm on the chest, It looks too jagged and unappealing.



-rubs chin- The leg on our right looks too small on the interior.

[Edited on 09.02.2012 7:26 PM PDT]

  • 09.02.2012 9:21 AM PDT

Hey I am a big Bungie fan ever since I played Halo 2. I love the series, I love Bungie. I have made a few Bungie logos in my metal shop.

Same but i looks really great
Posted by: Habah
Is that a shadow or did he piss himself?

Just joking, It's great.

  • 09.02.2012 1:44 PM PDT

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Well I tried to make it as close as possible as this Keyes design.

  • 09.02.2012 8:47 PM PDT
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Keyes looks... much younger.

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  • 09.03.2012 12:20 AM PDT


Posted by: MasterSin
Well I tried to make it as close as possible as this Keyes design.


I SEE.

Are you done with it or will you add a few more things? Like the shines on the shoes, and making the shoes darker.

Also, you did the belt slightly wrong, I see why it looks messed up now, the belt is attached to the shirt when it SHOULD be attached to the pants, 'if' you so happened to fix a few things up with this, (hair being grey like in the original image) it would look a nicer.



Edit: Don't take the jackass aspects of my criticism to heart, this is how I am with everyone. (Myself included.)

[Edited on 09.03.2012 10:55 AM PDT]

  • 09.03.2012 10:51 AM PDT

Wheres Meh Sniper?

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I really like it, however it looks as if he had an accident, and doesn't care.

[Edited on 09.03.2012 5:51 PM PDT]

  • 09.03.2012 5:50 PM PDT

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Posted by: blindx1
I really like it, however it looks as if he had an accident, and doesn't care.


That's it! ;)

  • 09.03.2012 8:44 PM PDT

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Very nice!

  • 09.04.2012 6:02 AM PDT

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Posted by: MasterSin
Well I tried to make it as close as possible as this Keyes design.


I SEE.

Are you done with it or will you add a few more things? Like the shines on the shoes, and making the shoes darker.

Also, you did the belt slightly wrong, I see why it looks messed up now, the belt is attached to the shirt when it SHOULD be attached to the pants, 'if' you so happened to fix a few things up with this, (hair being grey like in the original image) it would look a nicer.



Edit: Don't take the jackass aspects of my criticism to heart, this is how I am with everyone. (Myself included.)


Nah, don't worry about it, I'm used to criticism, but yeah I'm done with it into new things and experimenting more with this penpad.

  • 09.04.2012 2:41 PM PDT

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Looks good reminds me of the old manga sorta. Robotech ect.

  • 09.04.2012 7:42 PM PDT


Posted by: Habah
Is that a shadow or did he piss himself?

Just joking, It's great.
My first thought too.

It is still great though.

  • 09.04.2012 10:02 PM PDT

Hi everyone :D

It's looks like good :D

  • 09.06.2012 2:30 AM PDT

Welcome to the town of "Diligence." I'm Mayor Due.

He looks proud to have pissed himself.

Cool drawing as well.

  • 09.06.2012 3:51 AM PDT
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Doesn't Keyes have an old school pistol he likes to wear?

  • 09.06.2012 7:24 AM PDT

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Posted by: CoRaMo
Doesn't Keyes have an old school pistol he likes to wear?


The chief took it, remember?

  • 09.06.2012 11:40 AM PDT


Posted by: MasterSin

Posted by: CoRaMo
Doesn't Keyes have an old school pistol he likes to wear?


The chief took it, remember?
Either that, or maybe the graphics engine just couldn't handle a pistol on somebody's belt. Y'know? Or maybe BUNGIE WAS JUST GOD DAMNED LAZY. -clears throat-

Although, he was seen holding a pistol in the level 343 Guilty Spark, If I recall correctly.

[Edited on 09.07.2012 9:43 PM PDT]

  • 09.07.2012 9:43 PM PDT