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Subject: [Poem] John's Clone

This is my poem from Halo Revolutions Volume 2 -- a Fan version of Evolutions.

Hope you like it.


From flowers and families
my story must be told.

I was flawed, imperfect
never to grow old.

But though battered and bruised
my heart failing now,
a pain in my spine and sweat on my brow,
I know it is not I that must save us now.

For I am not alone, but divided in flesh,
my better half fit and healthy, never to rest.

And as I lie dying, my dreams in sight
I know my brother, of me the clone,
will never give up the fight.


  • 09.27.2012 2:41 AM PDT

Posted by: Enormous Corgi
Posted by: Unanimate Objec
There's no way Nate Hawbaker's favorite hero is Alan Stuart


ALAN IS A BEAUTIFUL MAN!


Posted by: MaxRealflugel




It's really good, albeit pretty depressing. I liked how you didn't come out in the poem and just say 'clone', you just hinted at it.

Very nice job.

  • 09.27.2012 3:30 AM PDT

Awesome, as Mr U said, it does make you feel a bit.. Depressed. But then poems are meant to make you feel emotional.. right? With that then good job!

  • 09.27.2012 10:05 AM PDT