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In the Gaming world they call me The Prodigy. My guess is because I spent my time helping every person with every problem rather they where my enemies or not. With that said I also ended up blowing the minds of everyone I met online. And in the real world if we are talking about Game development and computer skill. None the less I tend to present my self in a generally professional manner and I do not tolerate an annoying degree of Disrespect or high levels of ignorance.
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Umm, Please Excuse the large amount of epic grammar fails and misspellings (I typed this years ago). Basically the beginning is a fail and the end is awesome. None the less enjoy this story I typed as an essay for my English class.
(Also I am not sure If this is supposed to go in the BUNGIE UNIVERSE Forum, Please inform me if it is in the wrong place)
(This does not follow the Halo Story)
HALO: THE LAST STAND
...He wakes up to a loud explosion boom boom a large explosion goes off beside him an alarm comes on seiera 259 go to battltstations we are under atack...(space chatter halo reach):..unsc warship dawn:we have a possable slip space rupture...reach: imposable check your sorces...dawn: i did it's them there here...boom (random spacecom voices): what the heck was that boom boom boom... Omg what's going on... Stop fireing we have people down here ... Boom..(random people on space com screaming for help)screaming end silence) reach: this is unsc warship dawn do you read me...anyone there please respond 259:this is seaera 259 we have Spartans on the ground sir where not going anywhere... Spacecom chat end)... Biohazred servace tag k11 a Spartan of the squad sareia 259 a set of specially trained spartans kept in secret by dr helsey creater of the mojolner Spartan program 259 includes 5 Spartans retrosamari h13 lord brandon k12 xsirenx x51 xdmankilrx 258 and biohazred k11. Boom k11 and his squad gets ready for battle putting on their moljolner armor plateing of head armor flameing recon chestplate katana and arms securty each getting their wepons ready while getting the sound of a pelicans engine fires up a speeker on the pelican comes on this is command are you ready k11: yes sir. He walks to the plican and activates the voice command mode k11:activate manual pilot he grabs the controles and lifts up the pelican and flies out of the already burning plasma melted base they fly over the barren land destroyed by covenant forces some of the land glassed by warships 1 minute later they reach the battlefield k11:get on that turret where flying over the enemy forces h13: look out enemy aa tank they have a lock on us turn quick they dodge 4 shots from the aa tank x51: keep your fire focased on that aatank k12: incoming projectile they make a sharp turn and dodge the shot x51: it's comeing back h13: turn quick k12:oh no it's to close boom 258:it hit our wing! meda meda where going down boom boom thi rest of the wings explode into pieces the pelican spins and crashes behind enemy forses... K11:give me# count the marines are dead where all that's left. The 5 Spartans get out of the pelican x51: our data tells us that where 1 mile from checkpoint k11: what's the aproximate enemy count h13: about 1500 covenant forces including 14 scarabs 20 hunters 300 and brutecheftens k11: ok... Listen up Spartans chances are that where not going to win this fight but we won't go out without a fight I say we go ou there and show them what we got now whose with me Spartans:ohra k11: now let's go kick some covenant *** h13: incomeing covanate forces k11: find some cover lord brandon I need you to set up that turret let's go the Spartans run for cover dodging thousands of plasma bullets and grenades they run inside a small bulding about the size of a traler house k11:we need to sucure this location I need to make contact with command Spartans: yes sir k11 command come in we have crashed but where about a mile from checkpoint we need reinforcements command: we are unable to send reinforcements there Are abot 3 aatanks blocking reinforcements k11: ok we will clear out the aatanks and punch a path threw the enemy k11 out. K11 ok Spartans we need to clear a path and takeout 3 aatanks to get our reinforcements now hold this position I'm ordering mac rounds k11: command conect unsc warship hellfire ordering mac rounds target enemy...fire k11: spartans find cover quick incomeing mac rounds boom the rounds hit sendingsmoke and shrapnel everywhere when the explosions stop the Spartans get up k11: enemy forces down let's takeout those aa tanks each Spartan get an enemy vehicle and moves in about a minut later of driveing and shooting... H13: aatank spoted 300 meters and closeing k11: good take battlepositions xsirenx soround his location withconstant fire lord Brandon you snipe me dman and retrosamari will cut down the middle and takeout that aatank each Spartan places a bomb on their vehicles and sets them to autopilot 10 seconds later boom the vehicles crash into the enemy and explode into smoke k11 shoting at the enemy and running for the tank and the 2 spartans covering him h13:frag out retrosamari throws a frag gernadat the enemy boom grunts and brutes explode and are shot threw he air k12:ahhh a brute noks him down with a hard hit his gungoes fliying threw the air the brute closes into him and pulles out an energy sword rready to stab boom a sniper bullet goes threw the brutes head and and the brute falls to the ground blood coming out of his head h13 gets his gun and and gets up k11: frag out k11 gets a grenade and shoves it in the back of the aatank and runs for cover boom the aaraith explodes a minute later of fighting a nother aatank comes to the battlefield k11:im going to hijack that aatank cover me he jumps on top of the tank rips the armor plated door of the top picks up the brute and cuts his head off with the katana on his back and gets in k11: run for cover he fires a huge barrage of fuelrod bullets at the enemy boom boom boom the enemy is cleared 1 remaining aatank boom boom k11 blows up the last aatank his tank unable to move dew to damage k11 gets out k11:keep sharp there's probably more k11:command ordering reinforcements aatanks cleared command:good job BIOHAZRED reinforcements are being sent to your location ok good k11 out k11 ok Spartans we need to wait here for reinforcements 10 minutes later a unschawk arrives and drops off the reinforcements k11:ok Spartans lets move out. They got 4 warthogs 2 mongooses and 11 marines with the reinforcements. They drive off to the checkpoint 2 minuts later h13:look out scarab zzzzzzz boom a giant lazer fires at them k11:fire at its legs and take it down 3 minuts later the scarab goes in to repair mode and temporarily shuts down k11 goes into it and blows up its engines and then runs for his life kaboooom an extremely large explosion goes off with plasma and fire everywhere the enemy still shooting at them k11:checkpoint reached it seams to be a forerunner terminal over here h13;how do you know its forerunner k11:because it has forerunner coding on it retrosamari I need you to report to command h13:yes sir message sent 1 minute h13:message recived playing now command:download this terminal to the unsc database then destroy it k11:yes sir, boom to marines explode into flames k11:no where loseing our marines boom k11:that was the last or our reinforcements their all dead beep a sticky grenade is thrown from an enemy and sticks to lord Brandon boom he explodes and is thrown threw the air and hits a wall k11 runs over to him k11:are you ok k12:no this is my end don't give up this fight win this battle his last words spoken he dies h13:upload complete boom the rest of the Spartans other than k11 explode all but 1 killed instantly h13:biohazred k11 runs to the heavily injured Spartan h13: command says the terminal is a weapon that will destroy this whole solarsystem if we don't destroy it k11:wat about you h13:leave me here k11:no im not leaving you here you're my best Spartan h13:set the charges and blow that terminal to smithereens my time is up it's the end of my as sarent Johnson sad is his last words and now mine send me out with a bang the Spartans voice slowly descends into a quiet whisper and dies k11 looks up at the brute cheften who threw the grenade and killed his Spartans k11:you son of a----he runs up to the brute and shoves a grenade down his thought and throws him to the enemy boom he runs back and sets the charges 3 minutes till detonation he gets up completely out of ammo so he throws his gun down and pulls the katana off his back then says if this is my last stand than im goanna make it one hell of a fight he runs toward the enemy shing he cuts the head off a brute thousands of plasma shots deflecting off his plasma proof sword shing he cuts a plasma grenade in half and slings it at the enemy with his sward boom boom the enemy blinded by the explosion he grabs a sword from h13s back and jumps threw the smoke shing 2 heads fall off the brutes beside him shing he stabs another and cuts 3 more in half a hunter runs up to him he runs right passed it and it slowly slides in half then 2 hunters and 10 brute cheftens run up to him he zzzzzzboom he jumps between the hunters dogging the deadly lazers shing he cuts off both their heads as they fall to the ground behind him he runs forward cutting a gravity hammer in half then sliceing to brutes in half a gravity hammet shoots him up threw the air and he throws a katana into one of the fuel rod cannons as it fieres boom the sword is shot threw the air he lands and catches it beep boooooom the explosion geos off destroying the terminal and everything in 1 miles radios as k11 watches the explosion come to him he says this is my last stand this is the end boom...inside the unscwarship forward until dawn captin keys sends out a distress signal to all unsc warships saying that when he came out of a slipstream whild following a covenant space cruiser he found a forerunner artifact called halo that is a last resort weapon that will destroy everything and nothing can survive it 117 is on the ground and ready to kill..the end.
[Edited on 10.02.2012 12:11 PM PDT]