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Subject: a fan fiction ending
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the halos are activated and the ark protects the earth but Gravemind make it to earth before it is activated and a showdown begins between the MC and GM.

the Masterchief has a bomb that he was going to destroy the ark with which hes is keeping wherever he keeps his guns.
Masterchief is losing really badly then gm picks him up and says you lose and master chief replys i never lose and detonates the bomb.

i know my grammer sucks

  • 06.27.2006 8:10 AM PDT
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If that was the ending I would be very dissapointed. It's to cheeeeeesy.

  • 06.27.2006 8:29 AM PDT
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there would be more detail in it obviousl im sure it could be made uncheesiefied

  • 06.27.2006 8:47 AM PDT
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can u do better lol
if u can then go on if not constructive criticism would be helpful

  • 06.27.2006 8:54 AM PDT
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Taking out the 'I never lose.' line would help it. A lot.

  • 06.27.2006 9:02 AM PDT
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Read about the Forgotten Spartan I Program
Butane: To protect the world from devastation!
sir_brilliant: To unite all people within our nation!
Rainman89: To denounce the evils of truth and love!
sir_brilliant: To extend out reach to the stars above!
SpaceGhostFlyer: Jessie!
Butane: James!
sir_brilliant: Team Rocket blasting off at the speed of light
Butane: Surrender now or prepare to fight
sir_brilliant: Meowth, that's right!

Can we do better?

yes, We can.

  • 06.27.2006 9:40 AM PDT
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im not 6 im 18 but i heard it a while ago on here and i couldnt remember how it went and the "i never lose" line was a reference to the books

  • 06.27.2006 2:37 PM PDT
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"i know my GRAMMER sucks"

lol! no offense...

BTW i don't like that ending

  • 06.27.2006 2:40 PM PDT