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Subject: Random writing.

+1 for you good sir.

Wrong forum.

[Edited on 11.29.2012 9:07 PM PST]

  • 11.29.2012 7:30 PM PDT

"You are the last of your kind: bred for combat, built for war. You're the master of any weapon, pilot of any vehicle, and fear no enemy"

Pretty nice, but don't use repetition of the same letters to exaggerate something. Use italics. It's a lot cleaner.

  • 11.29.2012 8:04 PM PDT

+1 for you good sir.


Posted by: xAvery Johnson
Pretty nice, but don't use repetition of the same letters to exaggerate something. Use italics. It's a lot cleaner.
Thanks. I'll keep that on mind for future works. Glad you liked it though.

  • 11.29.2012 8:23 PM PDT

No u

The gallery is meant for Bungie related art/writing/etc.

  • 11.29.2012 8:45 PM PDT

+1 for you good sir.


Posted by: Doctor Jensen
The gallery is meant for Bungie related art/writing/etc.
I'll move it to the flood. Thanks.

  • 11.29.2012 9:04 PM PDT

No u


Posted by: Adamal123

Posted by: Doctor Jensen
The gallery is meant for Bungie related art/writing/etc.
I'll move it to the flood. Thanks.
Yeah, sorry, didn't mean for that to sound rude or anything. It's a good piece.

  • 11.29.2012 11:22 PM PDT