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I showed this to a few people and they said it was decent/really good. Any opinions/feedback would be appreciated, thanks.
I remember the time we spent together
Memories that will be with me forever
Staying up all night, talking online
Sharing our deepest thoughts 'till sunrise
It will always be something I will miss
Its a shame how things have come to this
Those rare times where we spoke face to face
It felt so right, yet so out of place
I could not blink, my lungs just stopped
My lips froze up, my heart just dropped
When you smiled at me I felt so weak
And used all my strength to try and speak
You did something no-one else could have done
That's when I realised you were the one
Perhaps it was something you could see
To be with you through eternity
You understood me like no-one else
Gave me faith to believe in myself
I thought we would never be apart
Evoked by your name across my heart
Then comes the day which I -blam!-ed up and regret
A slow descent in my life, like the sunset
I said I loved a new girl who I just met
But wait, I haven't mentioned the worst part yet
She didn't exist, wasn't even real
My head is messed up, it's never tranquil
Don't know why I did it, I wasn't thinking
As time flies by, it remains a mystery
But you found out, you were never meant to though
One minute I'm your friend, the next I'm your foe
You messaged me, saying it wasn't worth it
But I wasn't gonna put up with that -blam!-
I said it was a joke, and it was all lies
A harmless prank, but you never saw the funny side
In fact you told me it was time to move on
Left me wonderin' if what we had was gone
You were serious, you weren't -blam!-ing around
In a second, my life was turned upside-down
What happened next is something I hate to say
The events that took place still haunt me today
Made up a story 'bout a girl who was fake
Now I've lost you, it was a stupid mistake
I know I screwed up, it's something I don't deny
Kept apologising, but you never replied
It was as though I never existed on this earth
But I still kept my head high for all I was worth
Cause they say before things get better, they get worse
But that statement is false, in fact it's in reverse
Cause when I was with you, I thought love was an asset
You unintentionally taught me that when we first met
Then when you left me, I felt like I was in debt
Feeling like I'm not good enough, that's all I get
Confessed all my sins, but you pushed me aside
Ignorant of the feeling I get deep inside
The part of me that tells me to win you back
Is the confidence speaking, which now I lack
Then there's part of me that says it's pointless
Convincing me it's too big of a mess
All these voices in my head, telling me what to do
I know I can't move on when I'm still in love with you
[Edited on 11.29.2012 10:04 PM PST]