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Subject: My brother (horror story attempt)

Yesterday afternoon i went into my brothers room to spend some time with him. He has extreme depression so i try to spend time with him whenever i get the chance to cheer him up. He was watching t.v in his bed (pretty much the only thing he can do) and when i sat down he just looked at me. He doesn't talk much usually but he was acting really different and not responding to anything i said.

I went to leave the room because i thought maybe he wanted to be alone when he said "wait, come see me tonight, ill need something". Him saying that was so odd it hit me off guard, i didnt even give it a response, he always trys to act like he doesnt need anything from anyone.

So the beginning of that night was normal enough, i was just watching t.v, when i heard giggling coming from my brothers room. I remembered his request so i walked over to his room trying to be as quiet a possible. I dont know why i was trying to be quiet, i think it was because a part of me knew something was wrong. I peeked through his door and noticed he wasnt on his bed. I was about to go check to see if he had fallen off the bed somehow when i noticed him standing in the far corner of the room. His arms and legs were flying around, he looked like he was some kind of puppet being flung about by some unknown force. The way his limbs were bending looked very awkward, if he wasnt paralyzed from a C4 spine injury it still would be impossible for him to twist like that. Through the t.vs light i could see his face and he looked completely out of it, his eyes were wide open and he had a huge smile on his face. He was giggling too, which was the most unsettling part.

I crept away from his door and into my room and locked it. Almost right after i did i heard something walk up to my door and then walk back into my brothers room. I sat up all night listening, picturing different scenarios that might have happend if he had noticed me at his door. It wasnt until today when i left my room in daylight and saw my parents were still alive that i went to check on my brother again. I peeked through his door like i did last night, he was back in his bed like normal. I went to walk away when he said "why didnt you come see me last night". I replied trying to sound normal that i had just forgot and fallen asleep and he just told me "no you didnt". I never thought it could be possible to be so terrified of my little brother. I returned to my room and locked the door.

Tonight ive been wondering if some kind of miracle happened. Was he going to show me he could move as a surprise? I dont know, the way he was twisting his limbs was too odd, he would have been in pain if he could feel them. So many questions run through my head as i hear him giggle in the next room, I wont be getting much sleep.

(thats about it, tell me what ya think)

  • 12.01.2012 10:52 PM PDT

Posted by: Gen Petitt
ME2 was known for stupidity and being retarded

But seriously, if you want people to take your writing seriously, here's an apostrophe. ' Put it to good use.

[Edited on 12.01.2012 10:59 PM PST]

  • 12.01.2012 10:53 PM PDT

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  • 12.01.2012 10:55 PM PDT
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Does bad a** freelancer stuff looks and sees carolina O_O dont hurt me

I like it, it sounds like a intresting read. keep it up

  • 12.01.2012 10:57 PM PDT