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Posted by: Kurosaki_Kun
Hey, Flood. I'm sorry to bother you guys with another thread about girls, but I just feel really hurt. I'm alone right now and don't have anyone to talk to, so I thought maybe I could get a little help from you guys.
I'm in high school, and I wrote this poem for a girl to ask her out. It didn't turn out so well and she ended up laughing in my face and saying no. I had a really big crush on her and it just really hurt for her to turn my down so easily.
I need a quick way to get over her.
Here's the poem I wrote for her, I know, it's cheesy but It's something that came from my heart, and I felt like that's all that really should have mattered.
Roses are Red violets are blue, the world I would give to be with you. I say these words not out of spite, but so I can be with you forever in the light. You make me love, and you make me cry, one kiss and all I could do is fly. I wish me and you could stay together forever and not be far. You're like the crayola to my heart because you color me. I didn't know that's how I could feel, but you're the one who made it be. I just hope you could see a future together with you and me.
Writing a poem is NOT the way to go. Harsh way to learn, OP.