- Zombine
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Yeah, I had a lot of trouble ending it. I do have a much better ending in mind but I've never sat down and done it. This was actually written in a single run, no editing. The goal was to create an emotional story in two pages since the VN project was inspired by Katawa Shoujo and the director wanted feels up the ass. So like 30 minutes, no editing and I haven't touched it since.
Posted by: petitminou
@Zombine
Not bad, but the ending was underwhelming. The idea of selling body parts is interesting, but it would have been more interesting if the body was that of a donor. Or, if he salvaged parts off his own brother to pay for his meal.