- CrazzySnipe55
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So I write quite a bit and sometimes I've even been known to write a short story when I'm bored. I've been told by English teachers and peers in the past that I'm a good writer, but my most common criticism is that my sentences can, at times, become rather tangential and hard-to-navigate. Either way, I got pretty invested in this short story (you can tell because I finished it, something I usually don't do) and wanted some feedback and since you're here and my English teacher isn't I figured I'd see what you all thought of it.
Bear in mind: in Word it was around 6 pages long and its ~3000 words and, as is customary with almost all short stories, there is no TL;DR.
So, without further ado, One More Time.
e: Oh well...
e2: Hoped I'd get at least one person to reply... :(
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[Edited on 12.04.2012 11:13 PM PST]